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    Posted: September 30 2016 at 11:26
Some guy wrote up a very in-depth analysis of all the Peter Sinfield KC lyrics. Not sure how accurate, or even coherent, most of the 20 chapters are, as I've only browsed excerpts, but fans may want to give it a read:

when i was a kid a doller was worth ten dollers - now a doller couldnt even buy you fifty cents
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Not that I'm aware of but would love to be part of such a project.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: September 26 2016 at 04:50
The same interest and the same names came to mind - for me it's a retirement project, which is coming up soon!!!!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 24 2013 at 18:59
Originally posted by progbethyname progbethyname wrote:

Originally posted by The.Crimson.King The.Crimson.King wrote:



Originally posted by progbethyname progbethyname wrote:

<span style="line-height: 1.2;">Also. Does A SCRIPT FOR A JESTERS TEAR give you confidence not wallow in a lost love? </span>Listening to a SCRIPT never makes me want to Dwell in such matters. Nice story though and picture of emotions relayed by FISH. anyways. I know I'm a bit different. Lol

"Promised wedding now a wake" is such a powerful image...and the way he spits it out with such venom on the live "Thieving Magpie" version of Script always knocks me out...Bowdown



I guess I don't any woman to make me feel that way. Fish. Puts me on the defensive not to feel let down by a woman.

'The Game is oooooooooooooover!!!!'



No remorse no regrets. It's hard to do have this in the game of love.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 24 2013 at 18:57
Originally posted by The.Crimson.King The.Crimson.King wrote:



Originally posted by progbethyname progbethyname wrote:

<span style="line-height: 1.2;">Also. Does A SCRIPT FOR A JESTERS TEAR give you confidence not wallow in a lost love? </span>Listening to a SCRIPT never makes me want to Dwell in such matters. Nice story though and picture of emotions relayed by FISH. anyways. I know I'm a bit different. Lol

"Promised wedding now a wake" is such a powerful image...and the way he spits it out with such venom on the live "Thieving Magpie" version of Script always knocks me out...Bowdown



I guess I don't any woman to make me feel that way. Fish. Puts me on the defensive not to feel let down by a woman.

'The Game is oooooooooooooover!!!!'

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 24 2013 at 18:50
Originally posted by progbethyname progbethyname wrote:


Also. Does A SCRIPT FOR A JESTERS TEAR give you confidence not wallow in a lost love? 
Listening to a SCRIPT never makes me want to Dwell in such matters. Nice story though and picture of emotions relayed by FISH. anyways. I know I'm a bit different. Lol

"Promised wedding now a wake" is such a powerful image...and the way he spits it out with such venom on the live "Thieving Magpie" version of Script always knocks me out...Bowdown


Edited by The.Crimson.King - June 24 2013 at 18:50
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 24 2013 at 18:03
Originally posted by The.Crimson.King The.Crimson.King wrote:


Originally posted by progbethyname progbethyname wrote:

Originally posted by The.Crimson.King The.Crimson.King wrote:


Originally posted by progbethyname progbethyname wrote:

^ this is fun.



It's just amazing the insight and creativity FISH has in his lyrics. He has serious depth. Not too many like him.
I'm glad he has been the subject of topic on this forum. He should be well known and appreciated.

Now, what can we say out of the 4 albums FISH has with MARILLION had the most impact on yourself, lyrically??

For me it's Misplaced Childhood.  There are too many excellent metaphors and analogies to count as the main character relives the myriad twists and turns of his love-ravaged existence.  The song "Childhood's End" where he confronts himself in a mirror rediscovering that his true self still exists even after his trials and tribulations gives me the chills every single time I hear it Clap


Ah yes. The infamous man in the mirror confronting the true character of himself. That's a powerful point in the story. Dear god what an album! Really teaches you to grow up!   

Ya, maybe they should have titled the album:
Misplaced Childhood (or How I Learned to Get Over Myself) LOL


Well maybe not that harshly But we all need a shot in the arm to either wake up or put petty squabbles aside and move on with your life. Really all 4 fish albums send out a very deep and meaningful message and all are helpful in one's life. I think it's an honor to be touched and changed by some of the FISH years Marillion albums.
Sometimes in life we just gotta put the headphones on and be taught a few things. I owe a lot to music poetic or not. :)

Also. Does A SCRIPT FOR A JESTERS TEAR give you confidence not wallow in a lost love?
Listening to a SCRIPT never makes me want to Dwell in such matters. Nice story though and picture of emotions relayed by FISH. anyways. I know I'm a bit different. Lol
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 24 2013 at 17:35
Originally posted by progbethyname progbethyname wrote:

Originally posted by The.Crimson.King The.Crimson.King wrote:


Originally posted by progbethyname progbethyname wrote:

^ this is fun.



It's just amazing the insight and creativity FISH has in his lyrics. He has serious depth. Not too many like him.
I'm glad he has been the subject of topic on this forum. He should be well known and appreciated.

Now, what can we say out of the 4 albums FISH has with MARILLION had the most impact on yourself, lyrically??

For me it's Misplaced Childhood.  There are too many excellent metaphors and analogies to count as the main character relives the myriad twists and turns of his love-ravaged existence.  The song "Childhood's End" where he confronts himself in a mirror rediscovering that his true self still exists even after his trials and tribulations gives me the chills every single time I hear it Clap


Ah yes. The infamous man in the mirror confronting the true character of himself. That's a powerful point in the story. Dear god what an album! Really teaches you to grow up!   

Ya, maybe they should have titled the album:

Misplaced Childhood (or How I Learned to Get Over Myself) LOL
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 24 2013 at 17:10
Originally posted by The.Crimson.King The.Crimson.King wrote:


Originally posted by progbethyname progbethyname wrote:

^ this is fun.



It's just amazing the insight and creativity FISH has in his lyrics. He has serious depth. Not too many like him.
I'm glad he has been the subject of topic on this forum. He should be well known and appreciated.

Now, what can we say out of the 4 albums FISH has with MARILLION had the most impact on yourself, lyrically??

For me it's Misplaced Childhood.  There are too many excellent metaphors and analogies to count as the main character relives the myriad twists and turns of his love-ravaged existence.  The song "Childhood's End" where he confronts himself in a mirror rediscovering that his true self still exists even after his trials and tribulations gives me the chills every single time I hear it Clap


Ah yes. The infamous man in the mirror confronting the true character of himself. That's a powerful point in the story. Dear god what an album! Really teaches you to grow up!   
Gimmie my headphones now!!! 🎧🤣
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 24 2013 at 16:52
Originally posted by progbethyname progbethyname wrote:

^ this is fun.



It's just amazing the insight and creativity FISH has in his lyrics. He has serious depth. Not too many like him.
I'm glad he has been the subject of topic on this forum. He should be well known and appreciated.

Now, what can we say out of the 4 albums FISH has with MARILLION had the most impact on yourself, lyrically??

For me it's Misplaced Childhood.  There are too many excellent metaphors and analogies to count as the main character relives the myriad twists and turns of his love-ravaged existence.  The song "Childhood's End" where he confronts himself in a mirror rediscovering that his true self still exists even after his trials and tribulations gives me the chills every single time I hear it Clap


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 24 2013 at 14:06
^ this is fun.



It's just amazing the insight and creativity FISH has in his lyrics. He has serious depth. Not too many like him.
I'm glad he has been the subject of topic on this forum. He should be well known and appreciated.

Now, what can we say out of the 4 albums FISH has with MARILLION had the most impact on yourself, lyrically??

For me, it has to be CLUTCHING AT THE STRAWS.
That is an album that really taught me not be a person to get overly aquainted and comfortable with the whole 'bar culture.' To me, it's really easy to get caught up being a complete barfly and piss away your life in the process.
The album, as a whole, inspired me to choose athletics over being a bar stool and to hang out with the right people in life, especially not the ones who will drag you down with them. Lastly, the album taught me that if you become really good at something don't let it get away from you so easy by being a victim of bad habit. In This instance, I'm a runner so hanging out at the bar all the time won't help my talents at all.

Just a bit of food for thought, but I'd be very interested to hear what you all have to say including TUBES AND KNOBBY if they freaking behave! Lol
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 23 2013 at 15:24
Originally posted by Dean Dean wrote:

Originally posted by The.Crimson.King The.Crimson.King wrote:

 

I found a clip of "Incubus" with Fish explaining his lyrical intention.  He doesn't specifically mention "The Web" or the "flower and gravestone", but does tell an amusing story of an embarrassing photograph LOL

Clap nice find. He does mention The Web at the beginning of the intro-story.

Right you are!  I missed it the first time through...guess I just couldn't understand his Scottish Highland Brogue Confused


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 23 2013 at 14:34
Originally posted by The.Crimson.King The.Crimson.King wrote:

Originally posted by Dean Dean wrote:

Originally posted by Tubes Tubes wrote:

I always thought the gravestone and flower were allusions to the death of his spilt seed and his own mourning (self pity) about it. The message: Don't jack off. You're killing potential people.
Fish would not make such a statement and it's a wild leap of imagination to interpret it that way.
 
Incubus continues from where The Web finishes. For clues compare "You're all but forgotten, A mote in my heart" from The Web with " I've played this scene before, I the mote in your eye" from Incubus - they are thematically linked through photographs "Faded photos exposing pain"/"The darkroom unleashes imagination in pornographic images".
 
The Web was about a person not letting go after the end if a relationship, Incubus is the same person discovering compromising photographs from that relationship and realising the embarassment they could cause to the ex-girlfriend now. "With no flower to place before this gravestone" is merely an observation that there is no one mourning the death of that old relationship.

I found a clip of "Incubus" with Fish explaining his lyrical intention.  He doesn't specifically mention "The Web" or the "flower and gravestone", but does tell an amusing story of an embarrassing photograph LOL

Clap nice find. He does mention The Web at the beginning of the intro-story.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 23 2013 at 12:12
Originally posted by Dean Dean wrote:

Originally posted by Tubes Tubes wrote:

I always thought the gravestone and flower were allusions to the death of his spilt seed and his own mourning (self pity) about it. The message: Don't jack off. You're killing potential people.
Fish would not make such a statement and it's a wild leap of imagination to interpret it that way.
 
Incubus continues from where The Web finishes. For clues compare "You're all but forgotten, A mote in my heart" from The Web with " I've played this scene before, I the mote in your eye" from Incubus - they are thematically linked through photographs "Faded photos exposing pain"/"The darkroom unleashes imagination in pornographic images".
 
The Web was about a person not letting go after the end if a relationship, Incubus is the same person discovering compromising photographs from that relationship and realising the embarassment they could cause to the ex-girlfriend now. "With no flower to place before this gravestone" is merely an observation that there is no one mourning the death of that old relationship.

I found a clip of "Incubus" with Fish explaining his lyrical intention.  He doesn't specifically mention "The Web" or the "flower and gravestone", but does tell an amusing story of an embarrassing photograph LOL

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 23 2013 at 12:04
Originally posted by progbethyname progbethyname wrote:

Originally posted by The.Crimson.King The.Crimson.King wrote:


Originally posted by progbethyname progbethyname wrote:

Agalloch are blowing my mind these days.

The album. ASHES AGAINST THE GRAIN.

Here are the opening lyrics...

The texture of the soul is a vermillion flood
               From a wound carved from an oath; it fills the riverbank a sanguine fog

               These arms were ment to be lost! Hacked, severed and forgotten
               The texture of timevidvs whisper that echoes across the flood
               It's hymn resonates from tree to tree, though ever sullen bough it sings
               These boughs were said to be lost! Torn, Unearthed and broken
                 Earth to flesh, flesh to wood, cast these LIMBS into water
                 Flesh to wood, wood to stone, cast the stone into water....


Ok. Wow. This is heavy doom and gloom and such a bleak outlook on the nature of our souls.

What do you guys think? Beautiful and brutal right?

I like it, "Hacked, Severed and Forgotten" could have been the title of a Peter Hammill song.  I was intrigued so I hit youtube and listened to the whole album.  First time I've heard them...vaguely remind me of My Dying Bride's, "As the Flower Withers".  Nice marriage of words and music...though without your translation I doubt I could have picked them out Wink  


Also. Have you listened to Van Der Graf Generator's GoldBluff? To you have an appreciation in General For Hammil's song writing lIke say for, ARROW. ? Anyway how. Just curious. I want to explore more of VDGG's music.

Ya, you could say I've heard Godbluff...I bought the masterpiece in 1977 Thumbs Up  Seriously, your collection of lyrical poetry isn't complete until you've experienced at least the 1st 8 VDGG (up to 1977) as well as the 1st 11 PH solo albums (up to 1982).  Hammill has also published 2 books of poetry/lyrics/stories, 1974's "Killers, Angels, Refugees" and 1982's "Mirrors, Dreams, Miracles" but good luck finding those as I believe they'be been out of print for 20+ years.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 23 2013 at 12:02
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The continuation of THE WEB eh? Wow. Very interesting and the way you explain it sounds quite accurate. Thank for this. :)
As much as I would love to claim ownership of astounding insight and lyrical interpreation, I cannot - this is Fish's explanation, not mine. Wink
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 23 2013 at 10:33
Originally posted by Tubes Tubes wrote:

Musically, you can't even compare Marillion to Genesis. Marillion is, if I were to use the familial analogy, the half-retarded step-child of Genesis.

Absolute bullsh*t on a stick....and despite the more obvious moments in the intitial recordings and debut album from Marillion, they completely moved away from that and made their own style very quickly. It's a lazy recycled ignorant opinion from someone who probably never bothered to actually listen to more than a few bits of their music.

Originally posted by Tubes Tubes wrote:

Classic Genesis beats Neo-Prog any day.

Cool...Yes, Genesis is one of the legends for a reason, but thanks for completely dismissing an entire sub-genre of bands that have put out some amazing music too.



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 23 2013 at 10:04
Originally posted by The.Crimson.King The.Crimson.King wrote:

Originally posted by Tubes Tubes wrote:

Musically, you can't even compare Marillion to Genesis. Marillion is, if I were to use the familial analogy, the half-retarded step-child of Genesis. The power of the music itself, is, in my experience, the best initial indicator of quality in the lyric. Classic Genesis beats Neo-Prog any day.  

Poetry exists rather or not there is tonal accompaniment so comparing Marillion and Genesis musically is irrelevant.  
 
With the exception that you are saying that to a group of people that do not read poetry and do not know/understand that it has a history of thousands of years and is a literary concept ... and they do not know if the lyrics they like fit the mold or not, and worse ... many of them are not interested in finding out!
 
So, what's left? ... the obvious comparison! Or as John Lennon would say ... working class heroes!
 
There are MANY great poets in rock music. But, sadly, many of them are buried in a bunch of "lyrics" because no one knows/reads anything else, to get a better idea of what it is all about. And just like here, most can only quote the top ten, and they have no idea that they are mis-representing the word "poetry" grossly! All they are doing is making Stairway to Heaven and Mick Jagger sound like poetry! And they aren't!  But that's not to say that they can not write very nice lyrics that stand up well, and folks remember them!
 
One kinda has to learn to read these things away from the music ... the work stands up very well. Most pop music and even Genesis lyrics, do not stand up well to poetry, but they are very well written, and defined, to make it better ... there was an effort by Peter Gabriel to make this "better" than just a lyric!
 
FISH is good, probably more clever than good, but not a "poet" per se. Fish is more of an actor with the words, than anything which helps the story telling side of things ... he knows how to act through these! Roy Harper and Peter Hammill in his solo works would be the bonafide true poets of progressive music, in the past 40/50 years. There are others, and it's hard to not consider Patti Smith and her style, either, but sadly, the majority of folks here are not interested in a serious discussion on poetry ... they can only discuss their "favorites"! ... and of course, compare it to Genesis! ... gotta have the token mention!


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 23 2013 at 10:00
Originally posted by Dean Dean wrote:

Originally posted by Tubes Tubes wrote:

I always thought the gravestone and flower were allusions to the death of his spilt seed and his own mourning (self pity) about it. The message: Don't jack off. You're killing potential people.

Fish would not make such a statement and it's a wild leap of imagination to interpret it that way.
 

Incubus continues from where The Web finishes. For clues compare "You're all but forgotten, A mote in my heart" from The Web with " I've played this scene before, I the mote in your eye" from Incubus - they are thematically linked through photographs "Faded photos exposing pain"/"The darkroom unleashes imagination in pornographic images".

 

The Web was about a person not letting go after the end if a relationship, Incubus is the same person discovering compromising photographs from that relationship and realising the embarassment they could cause to the ex-girlfriend now. "With no flower to place before this gravestone" is merely an observation that there is no one mourning the death of that old relationship.


The continuation of THE WEB eh? Wow. Very interesting and the way you explain it sounds quite accurate. Thank for this. :)
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 23 2013 at 09:58
Originally posted by The.Crimson.King The.Crimson.King wrote:


Originally posted by progbethyname progbethyname wrote:

Agalloch are blowing my mind these days.

The album. ASHES AGAINST THE GRAIN.

Here are the opening lyrics...

The texture of the soul is a vermillion flood
               From a wound carved from an oath; it fills the riverbank a sanguine fog

               These arms were ment to be lost! Hacked, severed and forgotten
               The texture of timevidvs whisper that echoes across the flood
               It's hymn resonates from tree to tree, though ever sullen bough it sings
               These boughs were said to be lost! Torn, Unearthed and broken
                 Earth to flesh, flesh to wood, cast these LIMBS into water
                 Flesh to wood, wood to stone, cast the stone into water....


Ok. Wow. This is heavy doom and gloom and such a bleak outlook on the nature of our souls.

What do you guys think? Beautiful and brutal right?

I like it, "Hacked, Severed and Forgotten" could have been the title of a Peter Hammill song.  I was intrigued so I hit youtube and listened to the whole album.  First time I've heard them...vaguely remind me of My Dying Bride's, "As the Flower Withers".  Nice marriage of words and music...though without your translation I doubt I could have picked them out Wink  


Also. Have you listened to Van Der Graf Generator's GoldBluff? To you have an appreciation in General For Hammil's song writing lIke say for, ARROW. ? Anyway how. Just curious. I want to explore more of VDGG's music.
Gimmie my headphones now!!! 🎧🤣
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