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Category: Site News, Newbies, Help and Improvements
Forum Name: Welcome newbies!
Forum Description: Introduce yourself and tell us what prog music you listen to
URL: http://www.progarchives.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=103648
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Topic: introduction
Posted By: Progkid
Subject: introduction
Date Posted: August 12 2015 at 02:14
Hi guys, I am a newbie and a 15 year old, I listen a wide variety of music including prog, btw can anyone read my reviews? of in absentia and Hand.Cannot.Erase and give me feed back? positive and negative? I'll appreciate the negative ones more, and I have been a visitor since last 3 months but joined yesterday! great site



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Posted By: Horizons
Date Posted: August 12 2015 at 11:29
YO PIPSQUEAK 

Welcome Aditya (awesome name btw).
Hope you find some fantastic new music - sounds like you are a Swilson fan already. Welcome to the club. 


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Crushed like a rose in the riverflow.


Posted By: Meltdowner
Date Posted: August 12 2015 at 11:39
Welcome to PA. I enjoyed reading your HCE review, there was a lot a didn't understand about the concept. I think it could be better if you would use paragraphs, it would be much easier to read.


Posted By: Horizons
Date Posted: August 12 2015 at 11:47
Just read the In Absentia review. Nice work. I'll try to give some feedback coming from my opinion. 

+ Length is great and lyrical/concept analysis is unique and interesting. 

- The concept and lyric reference dominate the review too much. Try to find a balance between how the music makes you feel, along with the music and some highlights of the concept/lyrics. 

Work on a stronger introduction to either the album or the review in general. 

Thumbs Up


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