Had a very uninspiring day and made this...
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Topic: Had a very uninspiring day and made this...
Posted By: asetic
Subject: Had a very uninspiring day and made this...
Date Posted: August 14 2015 at 07:03
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Judge me please https://soundcloud.com/asetic/kill-it-with-fire
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Posted By: Guldbamsen
Date Posted: August 14 2015 at 08:03
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Hi there:) I moved your thread to the 'Musicians exchange' part of the forum. ------------- “The Guide says there is an art to flying or rather a knack. The knack lies in learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss.” - Douglas Adams |
Posted By: GKR
Date Posted: August 14 2015 at 08:09
I like the most calm parts... you should invest under the progression of that parts.  ------------- - From each according to his ability, to each according to his need. |
Posted By: HackettFan
Date Posted: August 14 2015 at 09:20
| A lot of it was on the boring side. Metal or Prog Metal fans might like that. It needs some additional point of interest for me. A little more to hang your hat on. The intro needs something swooshing in the background or something; although it's a pretty cool and dramatic sound, as the sole focal point in a recording it just gives the feeling of someone playing in their bedroom. It's better than a recording I recently made a couple days ago, though. |
Posted By: Polymorphia
Date Posted: August 14 2015 at 09:53
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The parts themselves are interesting, but they develop in a predictable way. Not that being predictable is always bad, but the riff sets the song up for being something a bit more twisty/turny. ------------- https://dreamwindow.bandcamp.com/releases" rel="nofollow - My Music 
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Posted By: aglasshouse
Date Posted: August 14 2015 at 14:59
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Very nice. ------------- http://fryingpanmedia.com |