Moonchild: What is going on?
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Topic: Moonchild: What is going on?
Posted By: nmccrina
Subject: Moonchild: What is going on?
Date Posted: July 21 2009 at 15:43
Hi all, I am wondering how much of Moonchild (by KC, of course!) is "structured". By structured I mean possessing a consistent time signature that the musicians follow. Basically, I'm wondering if the musicians were sitting there counting "1...2...3...4" to themselves through the whole weird part, or if it was just like "I feel like playing a drum roll about now" or something. 
Edit: The reason I'm asking is because I was just trying to record a live keyboard part into the computer, and after about 20 bars my timing would get off (I wasn't using a metronome or anything). So I was marveling at the skill needed for all the members of the band to keep synced up without a consistent drum beat or melody line to set the tempo. Unless of course, they didn't.
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Posted By: The Runaway
Date Posted: July 21 2009 at 15:55
I dunno, really.
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Posted By: Snow Dog
Date Posted: July 21 2009 at 16:00
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Posted By: himtroy
Date Posted: July 21 2009 at 16:38
Well, once you get to the middle its so improvised that you should really just be doing something in that vein, theres no way anybody is actually going to perform exactly that, including KC ever. It's very different every time
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Posted By: Alberto Muñoz
Date Posted: July 21 2009 at 16:59
You have to listen a live version perhaps
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Posted By: Silly
Date Posted: July 21 2009 at 17:08
To my knowledge the whole middle section is free form improvisation. No musical rules apply whatsoever. What an amazing song though.
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Posted By: Nuke
Date Posted: July 21 2009 at 19:03
Ok, here's how it works. For the live show, Peter Sinfield (Lyricist, producer, lights) did some sort of light show (which might have been improvised) and the band's improvisation was based on the lights. Like, for example, if the lights were to go from blue to red, someone in the band might play a bluesy sequence that ends in a dissonant chord. Stuff like that. Since it was the most entertaining part of the live show, King Crimson decided to put it on the disk. So yeah, I think it was more like "I feel like playing a drum roll about now" than the band mambers actually counting measures.
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Posted By: nmccrina
Date Posted: July 21 2009 at 21:29
Thanks guys! It's fascinating stuff. I'm going to Youtube now to try and dig up a live video.
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Posted By: Epignosis
Date Posted: July 21 2009 at 21:37
The final nine minutes of "Moonchild" is a blight on an otherwise fine album.
Improvisation is one thing...doing something a horde of crippled six-year-old could do is quite another.
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Posted By: Epignosis
Date Posted: July 21 2009 at 21:38
That said, I remember when I posted my review, a thoughtful responder did have an intelligible way of looking at it...so there may be more to it. If I can locate his thoughts, I will add them here.
Still- it doesn't make me eager to listen to it.
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Posted By: Lodij van der Graaf
Date Posted: July 22 2009 at 00:39
Nuke wrote:
Ok, here's how it works. For the live show, Peter Sinfield (Lyricist, producer, lights) did some sort of light show (which might have been improvised) and the band's improvisation was based on the lights. Like, for example, if the lights were to go from blue to red, someone in the band might play a bluesy sequence that ends in a dissonant chord. Stuff like that. Since it was the most entertaining part of the live show, King Crimson decided to put it on the disk. So yeah, I think it was more like "I feel like playing a drum roll about now" than the band mambers actually counting measures.
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Posted By: topofsm
Date Posted: July 22 2009 at 01:00
No they kept their timing in a very ingenious way. This is how they did it:
MacDonald kept his hand on the keyboards he was playing for the first while. After that he changed the tempo to 3 BPM so the band could easily keep time along. Greg Lake at the time got bored of the take since he was done singing, and started walking around in a syncopated pattern silently. Giles made a drum noise in an alternating pattern between a drum tap every 79 32nd notes and 42 septuplet 16th notes. Fripp then got up from his stool every time a measure started. And then Sinfield worked the lights of the studio, keeping time in an ingenious way by flipping the switch whenever the hell he felt like it.
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Posted By: someone_else
Date Posted: July 22 2009 at 04:14
The structure of Moonchild is: about 3 minutes of song followed by about 9 minutes waste of space on this historically important album. The latter part is the chief reason why I think that this album is a bit overrated.
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Posted By: Visitor13
Date Posted: July 22 2009 at 04:54
nmccrina wrote:
Hi all, I am wondering how much of Moonchild (by KC, of course!) is "structured". By structured I mean possessing a consistent time signature that the musicians follow. Basically, I'm wondering if the musicians were sitting there counting "1...2...3...4" to themselves through the whole weird part, or if it was just like "I feel like playing a drum roll about now" or something. 
Edit: The reason I'm asking is because I was just trying to record a live keyboard part into the computer, and after about 20 bars my timing would get off (I wasn't using a metronome or anything). So I was marveling at the skill needed for all the members of the band to keep synced up without a consistent drum beat or melody line to set the tempo. Unless of course, they didn't.
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Not sure if this is going to help you, but here's what Cert1fied has to say about 'Moonchild' in his review of ITCOCK:
Moon Child - one of the most remarkable pieces in rock music Cue up the start of the piece. Ready? Here
we have drifts of mellotron, and a repeating picked guitar figure,
which is soon joined by a short, repeating guitar figure that is
important. Listen carefully to it's soaring tones - those opening notes
are remarkably similar to "Au Clair de Lune" by Claude Debussy. Greg picks up on this quickly with the vocal
line - a two-part affair that picks up on this figure, appending an
answering phrase, and acquiring a light accompaniment comprising
bell-like cymbals, and a regular falling soft tom-tom pattern. This is
repeated, then the second part of the verse picks for an additional
answer. The solo guitar takes the 1st "theme" and plays with it, before
the second verse is presented with the ongoing light percussion. Little
tension is built - but the song does not demand it. This is not a
dramatic song, and that is part of its progressive nature - it is
painting, with striking lights and shades, a kind of watercolour-hued
portrait of the Moon Child that is non-linear, which
kind of pushes against the intrinsically linear nature of music, yet covers many angles; "Dancing
in the shallows of a river", "Dreaming in the shadow of the willow",
"Talking to the trees of the cobweb strange". None of this necessarily
describes a person, real or ficticious - to me, it describes the
effects of moonlight on earth - the reflection in the river or
fountain, the moonbeams "dancing" and "Waving silver wands", and the
interplay of the moon's light on flowers, cobwebs and the sun dial.
"Sailing on the wind in a milk white gown" and "Waiting for a smile
from a sun child" are self-
explanatory, and "Playing hide and seek with the ghosts of dawn"
clearly refers to clouds. So the music expresses the soul of these ideas - the subtle keyboard changes highlight this best. You'll
note that this is not standard song structure - there is a 3-part idea
that is repeated 3 times for this first section, which could be seen as
verse/chorus/instrumental x3, except that the "chorus" is in no way a
chorus, but an extension of the verse. Then
we have the instrumental section, which continues this expression - it
seems a bit pointless to map it all out, but the first section appears
to represent the rippling waters of the river - the willow, of course,
will be on the river bank, and the slightly sinister edge that the
music acquires could be expressing this. We
continue in the branches of the trees, "talking of the cobweb strange"
- 5:28 might be expressing this, with tiny strands of melodic runs that
pick up from each other. Just re-read the lyrics as this section plays
out - it's not too hard to make your own mind up about what's being
expressed. The music of this section
has an atonal feel to it - and some of the stylisations are strikingly
similar to music in "Pierrot Lunaire", by Arnold Schoenberg. Listen to
"Der Kranken Mond" - particularly the flute backing. An online
recording of the entire work may be found online - note also that there
are 4 sections of Pierrot directly concerned with the moon. The
interplay between the instrumentalists here is remarkable - all aiming
for an overall series of pictures, or, rather continual moving image,
with none taking centre stage, going into personal space every now and
again, then rejoining the conversation, using a predefined set of
ideas. This is not aimless noodle - this is carefully constructed. The
point at which it all comes back together (around 10:45) is masterly -
all parts drifting slowly towards each other, and the little major
chord on the guitar clearly showing the "smile from the sun child" -
all music from this point has this upbeat feel of morning approaching
and the darkness lifting. All of which serves to underline "Moon Child"'s
position in the album - as the penultimate piece, it provides the
necessary contrast from which to kick into the grand splendour of "The
Court of the Crimson King". Indeed, if you have your stereo at the
necessary volume to catch each and every tiny detail in "Moon Child",
the title track is like a mighty rush of wind, and somewhat
overwhelming. It's in this dynamic perspective that the true power of
this album may be experienced - and you probably won't get it listening
to compressed mp3s on your computer speakers or headphones. On a
half-decent stereo, this contrast will blow your socks off. On a decent
system, it's like hearing it properly for the first time - every time.
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Posted By: Dick Heath
Date Posted: July 23 2009 at 05:20
The Doves managed to takethe essences of the opening part and incorporate it into the M62 Song.
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Posted By: The Runaway
Date Posted: July 23 2009 at 05:37
Silly wrote:
To my knowledge the whole middle section is free form improvisation. No musical rules apply whatsoever. What an amazing song though. |
I seriously doubt that, unless they recorded it in a full-band, which is very hard to pull-off.
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Posted By: progkidjoel
Date Posted: July 23 2009 at 05:52
Posted By: progkidjoel
Date Posted: July 23 2009 at 05:53
Blowin Free wrote:
Silly wrote:
To my knowledge the whole middle section is free form improvisation. No musical rules apply whatsoever. What an amazing song though. |
I seriously doubt that, unless they recorded it in a full-band, which is very hard to pull-off. |
Many bands have full improv sections...
Porcupine Tree's "Metanoia" is completely improvisation, and so is their "MOONLOOP: (Improvisation)" On Sky moves Sideways DISC2
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Posted By: Snow Dog
Date Posted: July 23 2009 at 06:08
Don't laugh, but he has been Pming me. He's really angry about this post and thinks I have it in for him.
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Posted By: The Runaway
Date Posted: July 23 2009 at 06:13
You do *sobs eternally*
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Posted By: Nuke
Date Posted: July 23 2009 at 19:22
progkidjoel wrote:
Blowin Free wrote:
Silly wrote:
To my knowledge the whole middle section is free form improvisation. No musical rules apply whatsoever. What an amazing song though. |
I seriously doubt that, unless they recorded it in a full-band, which is very hard to pull-off. |
Many bands have full improv sections...
Porcupine Tree's "Metanoia" is completely improvisation, and so is their "MOONLOOP: (Improvisation)" On Sky moves Sideways DISC2 |
And besides, king Crimson has become famous for their full band improvisations. It isn't too hard to imagine they started at it right from the get go...
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Posted By: Certif1ed
Date Posted: July 24 2009 at 02:54
...and all my words come back to me, in shades of mediocrity...
To summarise my review, the structure is essentially a verse/chorus song, followed by an improvisation which recapitulates the essential nature of the song by re-interpreting the lyrics musically.
It's utterly brilliant, and a superb example of musical onomatopoeia - but takes a very broad minded listener to appreciate it.
As I suggested, try listening to http://www.lunanova.org/pierrot/2003rec.html - Pierrot Lunaire by Arnold Schoenberg . Try http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D54-8RCh1So&feature=related - Mondestrunken to start. 
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Posted By: Greg W
Date Posted: July 24 2009 at 13:58
Quite simply, they recorded themselves tuning their instruments. That can be the only explanation. That whole middle part is rubbish.
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Posted By: progvortex
Date Posted: July 24 2009 at 14:18
There is no time signature to the instrumental portion of Moonchild. There is however a pulse to it. In other words, there's no set beats, but you can feel a shape to the music. I like to think of the instrumental section as a place where the band showcases unique textures and interplay between the textures. If you listen carefully, there is call and response happening. Robert Fripp plays two notes repeatedly and the vibes interject with a similar pattern. Giles plays a cymbal pattern that also compliments the riff. Think about it as a conversation between the instruments.
It is not rubbish. I don't like a lot of avant garde music, but Moonchild will give me chills every time.
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Posted By: Snow Dog
Date Posted: July 24 2009 at 14:20
Yeah, like the chills you get after throwing up in a toilet in the early hours of the morning.
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Posted By: Certif1ed
Date Posted: July 24 2009 at 15:00
Don't let narrow taste interfere with exploring wider musical avenues - after all, challenging music is what Prog is all about, not simple blues scale noodling and repetitive riffs.
If you don't understand Moon Child, take a bit of time to try - once you do, it not only makes more sense, but comes alive in an almost literal sense.
You don't have to like it - just understand why it was composed that way before dissing it, then you can diss it in an informed manner.
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Posted By: Snow Dog
Date Posted: July 24 2009 at 15:11
I like it personally. It has grown on me with time. I hated it at first on vinyl, it is so quiet and all the crackling and popping......aaaahh!
But now...calm! 
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Posted By: Visitor13
Date Posted: July 25 2009 at 13:28
Greg W wrote:
Quite simply, they recorded themselves tuning their instruments. That can be the only explanation. That whole middle part is rubbish. |
Quite simply, his pet must have been walking on the keyboard of his computer. That can be the only explanation. The whole quoted post is rubbish.
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Posted By: Greg W
Date Posted: July 26 2009 at 01:21
Its called a joke, buddy!
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Posted By: Certif1ed
Date Posted: July 26 2009 at 02:02
^Trouble is, it's difficult to see it as a joke, since some people really do think it sounds a touch on the random side, unbelievably...
The secret of great comedy is...
Timing.
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Posted By: Zargus
Date Posted: July 26 2009 at 05:26
I always loved the whole song yust as much as the rest of the album, i think the improvisation is very good and beautiful done. It always reminds me of hot summer days lying on my bed taking a nap and looking trough the window at the green garden outside...
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Date Posted: July 26 2009 at 05:30
Posted By: crimhead
Date Posted: July 26 2009 at 13:14
Posted By: progvortex
Date Posted: July 27 2009 at 21:38
Posted By: BaldFriede
Date Posted: July 28 2009 at 00:22
Epignosis wrote:
The final nine minutes of "Moonchild" is a blight on an otherwise fine album.
Improvisation is one thing...doing something a horde of crippled six-year-old could do is quite another.
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I love Moonchild, especially those nine minutes. Best part of the album. Seriously! Actually that seemingly unstructured part is indeed very well structured; the lyrics are totally reflected in that part. Example: The very end of Moonchild, where something like a melody comes up, is "the smile from a sunchild", in other words: The sun rises. Immediately before that you can hear the Moonchild play "hide and seek with the ghosts of dawn". If you take the lyrics sentence for sentence you will find that each line has a counterpart in that instrumental section.
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Posted By: DangerousCurves
Date Posted: July 28 2009 at 08:42
I must admit that I have always found Moonchild good to start with but then descending into what seemed to me, rather pointless meanderings, spoiling what for me what is a wonderful album otherwise.
However, after what you people have said about it as regards to the lighting and how it backs up what has been sung already, I am going to have to give it another listen!
It was incedently, the first King Crimson song I ever heard.
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Posted By: Certif1ed
Date Posted: July 28 2009 at 11:08
BaldFriede wrote:
I love Moonchild, especially those nine minutes. Best part of the album. Seriously! Actually that seemingly unstructured part is indeed very well structured; the lyrics are totally reflected in that part. Example: The very end of Moonchild, where something like a melody comes up, is "the smile from a sunchild", in other words: The sun rises. Immediately before that you can hear the Moonchild play "hide and seek with the ghosts of dawn". If you take the lyrics sentence for sentence you will find that each line has a counterpart in that instrumental section.
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My feelings exactly! 
Certif1ed wrote:
...the little major chord on the guitar clearly showing the "smile from the sun child" - all music from this point has this upbeat feel of morning approaching and the darkness lifting.
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Posted By: Snow Dog
Date Posted: July 28 2009 at 11:19
Certif1ed wrote:
...the little major chord on the guitar clearly showing the "smile from the sun child" - all music from this point has this upbeat feel of morning approaching and the darkness lifting.
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...and creatures waking up, flowers opening?
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Posted By: Epignosis
Date Posted: July 28 2009 at 11:27
BaldFriede wrote:
Epignosis wrote:
The final nine minutes of "Moonchild" is a blight on an otherwise fine album.
Improvisation is one thing...doing something a horde of crippled six-year-old could do is quite another.
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I love Moonchild, especially those nine minutes. Best part of the album. Seriously! Actually that seemingly unstructured part is indeed very well structured; the lyrics are totally reflected in that part. Example: The very end of Moonchild, where something like a melody comes up, is "the smile from a sunchild", in other words: The sun rises. Immediately before that you can hear the Moonchild play "hide and seek with the ghosts of dawn". If you take the lyrics sentence for sentence you will find that each line has a counterpart in that instrumental section.
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Yes, but that doesn't mean I want to subject myself to it.
And I am not at all convinced that all these lovely interpretations are objectively valid (poor adverb, but I cannot think of another); in other words, I am not convinced that there was any intent on the part of King Crimson to make the nine minute improvisation a reflection of the lyrics. I tend to think these interpretations are all drummed up to make something nonsensical make sense.
Happens quite often, really.
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Posted By: progvortex
Date Posted: July 28 2009 at 12:55
Epignosis wrote:
BaldFriede wrote:
Epignosis wrote:
The final nine minutes of "Moonchild" is a blight on an otherwise fine album.
Improvisation is one thing...doing something a horde of crippled six-year-old could do is quite another.
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I love Moonchild, especially those nine minutes. Best part of the album. Seriously! Actually that seemingly unstructured part is indeed very well structured; the lyrics are totally reflected in that part. Example: The very end of Moonchild, where something like a melody comes up, is "the smile from a sunchild", in other words: The sun rises. Immediately before that you can hear the Moonchild play "hide and seek with the ghosts of dawn". If you take the lyrics sentence for sentence you will find that each line has a counterpart in that instrumental section.
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Yes, but that doesn't mean I want to subject myself to it.
And I am not at all convinced that all these lovely interpretations are objectively valid (poor adverb, but I cannot think of another); in other words, I am not convinced that there was any intent on the part of King Crimson to make the nine minute improvisation a reflection of the lyrics. I tend to think these interpretations are all drummed up to make something nonsensical make sense.
Happens quite often, really.
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I agree. This notion that the instrumental portion of Moonchild is anything more than just music holds no validity. However, I don't mean to say that I don't enjoy Moonchild. I think that musically it is valid; the timbre of the instruments and interactions between the players is truly amazing to my ears.
BUT.... even so, I will admit that Moonchild can not stand alone. To me, Moonchild is a sort of dreamy hallway leading to the triumphant Court of the Crimson King. The hallway alone holds no grand significance, but just the thought of what comes at the end of the hall is what raises the hair on the back of my neck.
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Posted By: himtroy
Date Posted: July 28 2009 at 14:25
I think it's all god, I'm a fan of the real chill end nine minutes
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Posted By: BaldFriede
Date Posted: July 28 2009 at 15:32
Epignosis wrote:
BaldFriede wrote:
Epignosis wrote:
The final nine minutes of "Moonchild" is a blight on an otherwise fine album.
Improvisation is one thing...doing something a horde of crippled six-year-old could do is quite another.
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I love Moonchild, especially those nine minutes. Best part of the album. Seriously! Actually that seemingly unstructured part is indeed very well structured; the lyrics are totally reflected in that part. Example: The very end of Moonchild, where something like a melody comes up, is "the smile from a sunchild", in other words: The sun rises. Immediately before that you can hear the Moonchild play "hide and seek with the ghosts of dawn". If you take the lyrics sentence for sentence you will find that each line has a counterpart in that instrumental section.
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Yes, but that doesn't mean I want to subject myself to it.
And I am not at all convinced that all these lovely interpretations are objectively valid (poor adverb, but I cannot think of another); in other words, I am not convinced that there was any intent on the part of King Crimson to make the nine minute improvisation a reflection of the lyrics. I tend to think these interpretations are all drummed up to make something nonsensical make sense.
Happens quite often, really.
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This interpretation is not drummed up at all. I suggest you listen to the track again, and closely. You can even hear the Moonchild sing "You can't find me, you can't find me, neener neener neener" during the "hide and seek" part.
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Posted By: Certif1ed
Date Posted: July 28 2009 at 15:34
progvortex wrote:
Epignosis wrote:
BaldFriede wrote:
Epignosis wrote:
The final nine minutes of "Moonchild" is a blight on an otherwise fine album.
Improvisation is one thing...doing something a horde of crippled six-year-old could do is quite another.
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I love Moonchild, especially those nine minutes. Best part of the album. Seriously! Actually that seemingly unstructured part is indeed very well structured; the lyrics are totally reflected in that part. Example: The very end of Moonchild, where something like a melody comes up, is "the smile from a sunchild", in other words: The sun rises. Immediately before that you can hear the Moonchild play "hide and seek with the ghosts of dawn". If you take the lyrics sentence for sentence you will find that each line has a counterpart in that instrumental section.
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Yes, but that doesn't mean I want to subject myself to it.
And I am not at all convinced that all these lovely interpretations are objectively valid (poor adverb, but I cannot think of another); in other words, I am not convinced that there was any intent on the part of King Crimson to make the nine minute improvisation a reflection of the lyrics. I tend to think these interpretations are all drummed up to make something nonsensical make sense.
Happens quite often, really.
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I agree. This notion that the instrumental portion of Moonchild is anything more than just music holds no validity. However, I don't mean to say that I don't enjoy Moonchild. I think that musically it is valid; the timbre of the instruments and interactions between the players is truly amazing to my ears.
BUT.... even so, I will admit that Moonchild can not stand alone. To me, Moonchild is a sort of dreamy hallway leading to the triumphant Court of the Crimson King. The hallway alone holds no grand significance, but just the thought of what comes at the end of the hall is what raises the hair on the back of my neck.
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There is no notion that it's anything other than music of course, but surely you can see that there is validity in mine and Baldfriede's analysis that goes beyond mere poetic interpretation.
It's simply that the musical devices used make the composer's intentions obvious, like the thunderstorm in Beethoven's 6th, the moon imagery in "Pierrot Lunaire", the cheesey musical devices and "wrong notes" in Mozart's "Musikalischer Spass", the more basic seasonal imagery in Vivaldi's famous work, and the rather more subtle nautical references in Debussy's "La Mer" - it's programme music.
I like your description of a hallway, but tend to think of Moonchild more as the landscape through which the traveller must journey before he reaches the Court of the Crimson King, in which this strange, elfin creature exists - the presence of her character is almost tangible.
Why don't you think that the music describes the lyrics, especially given the rather exact examples given - is it simply that you don't hear it, or is there something in the music that informs you otherwise?
What does the sudden shift to the major from a non-established key signify to you, for example?
Do you really think it's not a significant event - just something random that happens to co-incide with the lyric at (roughly) that point?
Question specifically to Epignosis - what in the music makes you think that it was not the intention of the composers to re-interpret the lyrics?
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Posted By: Epignosis
Date Posted: July 28 2009 at 15:35
BaldFriede wrote:
Epignosis wrote:
BaldFriede wrote:
Epignosis wrote:
The final nine minutes of "Moonchild" is a blight on an otherwise fine album.
Improvisation is one thing...doing something a horde of crippled six-year-old could do is quite another.
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I love Moonchild, especially those nine minutes. Best part of the album. Seriously! Actually that seemingly unstructured part is indeed very well structured; the lyrics are totally reflected in that part. Example: The very end of Moonchild, where something like a melody comes up, is "the smile from a sunchild", in other words: The sun rises. Immediately before that you can hear the Moonchild play "hide and seek with the ghosts of dawn". If you take the lyrics sentence for sentence you will find that each line has a counterpart in that instrumental section.
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Yes, but that doesn't mean I want to subject myself to it.
And I am not at all convinced that all these lovely interpretations are objectively valid (poor adverb, but I cannot think of another); in other words, I am not convinced that there was any intent on the part of King Crimson to make the nine minute improvisation a reflection of the lyrics. I tend to think these interpretations are all drummed up to make something nonsensical make sense.
Happens quite often, really.
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This interpretation is not drummed up at all. I suggest you listen to the track again, and closely. You can even hear the Moonchild sing "You can't find me, you can't find me, neener neener neener" during the "hide and seek" part.
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You missed the first sentence of my reply. I've emphasized it for you. 
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Posted By: BaldFriede
Date Posted: July 28 2009 at 16:17
That's your privilege.I enjoy that part very much and definitely don't belong to the "skipper" fraction of this site.
By the way: I think it is amazing that King Crimson's first album has such high ratings, given that so many people don't like that part, even some who gave the album five stars. After all, it takes up more than 20% of the album.
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Posted By: Tsevir Leirbag
Date Posted: July 28 2009 at 16:22
Snow Dog wrote:
Aragorn224 wrote:
I dunno, really. |
Great contribution, but at least you got a post in! |
* And then I got a post in too
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Posted By: Epignosis
Date Posted: July 28 2009 at 16:39
BaldFriede wrote:
That's your privilege.I enjoy that part very much and definitely don't belong to the "skipper" fraction of this site.
By the way: I think it is amazing that King Crimson's first album has such high ratings, given that so many people don't like that part, even some who gave the album five stars. After all, it takes up more than 20% of the album.
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I like the album a lot, but that's mainly the reason it only got a three from me (though there are a couple of other reasons).
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Posted By: Nuke
Date Posted: July 28 2009 at 18:04
I don't know, I tend to rate stuff on it's merits, and the rest of the album is good enough that even if moonchild was the worst song in the history of the universe, the album would still get 5 stars from me. It's not like one song can ruin the others.
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Posted By: Certif1ed
Date Posted: July 29 2009 at 02:33
Epignosis wrote:
Yes, but that doesn't mean I want to subject myself to it. You missed the first sentence of my reply. I've emphasized it for you. 
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Seems odd, therefore, that you should have such a strong opinion on the piece, and be so certain about its qualities (or lack thereof) while not actually having listened closely - or even intend to.
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Posted By: Snow Dog
Date Posted: July 29 2009 at 04:28
BaldFriede wrote:
[ This interpretation is not drummed up at all. I suggest you listen to the track again, and closely. You can even hear the Moonchild sing "You can't find me, you can't find me, neener neener neener" during the "hide and seek" part.
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Ok..I'll give you the benefit of the doubt, but on my copy, I don;t have this bit.
This is turning into the big Moonchild hoax.
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Posted By: Chris S
Date Posted: July 29 2009 at 05:18
Moonchild is a classic piece.......................beginning, middle, end...period. I wouldn't have wanted it any other way.
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Posted By: BaldFriede
Date Posted: July 29 2009 at 06:37
Snow Dog wrote:
BaldFriede wrote:
[ This interpretation is not drummed up at all. I suggest you listen to the track again, and closely. You can even hear the Moonchild sing "You can't find me, you can't find me, neener neener neener" during the "hide and seek" part.
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Ok..I'll give you the benefit of the doubt, but on my copy, I don;t have this bit.
This is turning into the big Moonchild hoax. |
There is a short part towards the end of the song, before it becomes melodic, where the guitar repeats a phrase that goes "dum-dadada-dadada-dadadadum, dum-dadada-dadada-dadadadum"; this is what definitely reminds me of some kind of "neener neener neener" rhyme.
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Posted By: Snow Dog
Date Posted: July 29 2009 at 06:57
BaldFriede wrote:
Snow Dog wrote:
BaldFriede wrote:
[ This interpretation is not drummed up at all. I suggest you listen to the track again, and closely. You can even hear the Moonchild sing "You can't find me, you can't find me, neener neener neener" during the "hide and seek" part.
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Ok..I'll give you the benefit of the doubt, but on my copy, I don;t have this bit.
This is turning into the big Moonchild hoax. |
There is a short part towards the end of the song, before it becomes melodic, where the guitar repeats a phrase that goes "dum-dadada-dadada-dadadadum, dum-dadada-dadada-dadadadum"; this is what definitely reminds me of some kind of "neener neener neener" rhyme.
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And the "You can't find me, you can't find me"?
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Posted By: BaldFriede
Date Posted: July 29 2009 at 08:06
Snow Dog wrote:
BaldFriede wrote:
Snow Dog wrote:
BaldFriede wrote:
[ This interpretation is not drummed up at all. I suggest you listen to the track again, and closely. You can even hear the Moonchild sing "You can't find me, you can't find me, neener neener neener" during the "hide and seek" part.
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Ok..I'll give you the benefit of the doubt, but on my copy, I don;t have this bit.
This is turning into the big Moonchild hoax. |
There is a short part towards the end of the song, before it becomes melodic, where the guitar repeats a phrase that goes "dum-dadada-dadada-dadadadum, dum-dadada-dadada-dadadadum"; this is what definitely reminds me of some kind of "neener neener neener" rhyme.
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And the "You can't find me, you can't find me"? |
I was speaking of "neener neener" rhymes in general. But since they are playing Hide and Seek, the neener-rhyme probably refers to that.
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Posted By: Snow Dog
Date Posted: July 29 2009 at 08:12
BaldFriede wrote:
Snow Dog wrote:
BaldFriede wrote:
Snow Dog wrote:
BaldFriede wrote:
[ This interpretation is not drummed up at all. I suggest you listen to the track again, and closely. You can even hear the Moonchild sing "You can't find me, you can't find me, neener neener neener" during the "hide and seek" part.
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Ok..I'll give you the benefit of the doubt, but on my copy, I don;t have this bit.
This is turning into the big Moonchild hoax. |
There is a short part towards the end of the song, before it becomes melodic, where the guitar repeats a phrase that goes "dum-dadada-dadada-dadadadum, dum-dadada-dadada-dadadadum"; this is what definitely reminds me of some kind of "neener neener neener" rhyme.
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And the "You can't find me, you can't find me"? |
I was speaking of "neener neener" rhymes in general. But since they are playing Hide and Seek, the neener-rhyme probably refers to that.
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This is all in your head of course and has no bearing on reality.
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Posted By: BaldFriede
Date Posted: July 29 2009 at 10:50
Snow Dog wrote:
BaldFriede wrote:
Snow Dog wrote:
BaldFriede wrote:
Snow Dog wrote:
BaldFriede wrote:
[ This interpretation is not drummed up at all. I suggest you listen to the track again, and closely. You can even hear the Moonchild sing "You can't find me, you can't find me, neener neener neener" during the "hide and seek" part.
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Ok..I'll give you the benefit of the doubt, but on my copy, I don;t have this bit.
This is turning into the big Moonchild hoax. |
There is a short part towards the end of the song, before it becomes melodic, where the guitar repeats a phrase that goes "dum-dadada-dadada-dadadadum, dum-dadada-dadada-dadadadum"; this is what definitely reminds me of some kind of "neener neener neener" rhyme.
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And the "You can't find me, you can't find me"? |
I was speaking of "neener neener" rhymes in general. But since they are playing Hide and Seek, the neener-rhyme probably refers to that.
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This is all in your head of course and has no bearing on reality. |
I don't think so. That guitar figure does sound like a mocking nursery rhyme for sure. Anyway, what I try to demonstrate is that these final nine minutes of "Moonchild" are anything but pointless noodling, as Cert1fied already pointed out. Whether one actually hears the lyrics of the song reflected in those nine minutes is up to the listener. But with a bit of imagination it certainly is possible. So while part of it may be in my head, at least some part of it is in the music too.
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Posted By: Epignosis
Date Posted: July 29 2009 at 11:08
Certif1ed wrote:
Epignosis wrote:
Yes, but that doesn't mean I want to subject myself to it. You missed the first sentence of my reply. I've emphasized it for you. 
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Seems odd, therefore, that you should have such a strong opinion on the piece, and be so certain about its qualities (or lack thereof) while not actually having listened closely - or even intend to. |
My only opinion is this: "I strongly dislike it because it sounds like noodling and therefore is not enjoyable to me."
A movie may have deep meaning throughout, but if it's boring to me, I'm not going to want to sit there and analyze or dissect. It's that simple.
I feel no ill-will toward those who think "Moonchild" a masterpiece.
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Posted By: Certif1ed
Date Posted: July 30 2009 at 02:12
Epignosis wrote:
My only opinion is this: "I strongly dislike it because it sounds like noodling and therefore is not enjoyable to me."
A movie may have deep meaning throughout, but if it's boring to me, I'm not going to want to sit there and analyze or dissect. It's that simple.
I feel no ill-will toward those who think "Moonchild" a masterpiece.
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Fair enough, but I just thought you might have had a reason for describing my interpretation as "not objectively valid" and "drummed up", and disputing that there was any compositional attempt to reflect the lyrics other than you simply don't like it.
These seem like strong opinions to me - I just thought that you may have had some reasoning behind them.
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...I am not at all convinced that all these lovely interpretations are objectively valid (poor adverb, but I cannot think of another); in other words, I am not convinced that there was any intent on the part of King Crimson to make the nine minute improvisation a reflection of the lyrics. I tend to think these interpretations are all drummed up to make something nonsensical make sense.
Happens quite often, really.
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I think, if you read what I wrote in my review, listen to the music along with the lyrics - and the example music I gave from Schoenberg - and consider programme music generally, that my description holds a fair amount of water, objectively speaking.
Schoenberg adopted particular sounds and textures in the segments of Pierrot Lunaire that explicitly describe aspects of the moon - of course, the entire piece does, which is why the general flavours of the piece have these sounds consistently - but the 4 pieces in question are more strikingly similar to each other - and the music in the improvisational section of Moonchild is very similar harmonically and stylistically, if less texturally (due to different instrumentation) to Schoenberg's.
Of course, we cannot ever be 100% objective about music - or anything, if we really wanted to be pedantic about the meaning of objectivity. But we can inject a degree of objectivity by picking up on compositional devices, especially commonly used ones, which are very rarely random. As far as I know, only John Cage and his followers adopted truely random compositional methods.
The sudden change to the major chord, for example, is used by Beethoven in his Pastoral Symphony to indicate the sun appearing at the end of the thunderstorm (and we know he did this intentionally from his notes) - so my guess at the link with the lyrics is far from "invalid", but based on common use of this device: Note that it's not only Beethoven who used this type of change for this effect.
If you have a "valid" argument to support the opposing opinion, then that's great - that's what makes debate.
Don't dismiss my interpretations as "drummed up" just because you don't like the piece - I think my reasoning is fairly sound.
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