Poetry #too.

it's really good, sounds like something Syd Barrett would write after too many hours in front of the computer

Luca Pacchiarini wrote: I composed this one in italian, and I translated it in english.     Silence   The rustling of a never said wordis silence for these earsThe spreading of the wingsof a butterfly in an empty roomexplodes booms and resoundsripping our ears apartand making our head bleed.

Wow!
Deep!

-Joel

That one, yes. (But not this one.)

Neither is the one above this one.

I've got a little tummy, that's all. 

Oh, and I very rarely kill prostitutes. And I do mean very rarely.

some kind of a beeping

it's only a car outside
that makes that beeping sound
or perhaps not a car
but some kind of
a vehicle
anyway.

I guess they are moving
the excavator that
they use when they do
something
to the street
which was never broken
until
they dug
it up.

now it stopped
unless Elvis
buried it
which is
unlikely
due to
low
volume.

no,
there it is,
there it is
again.

there it is
again
and Elvis
doesn't help
at all.



Edited by Vompatti - July 07 2009 at 03:21

It's poetry to me and that's what counts. 

Thanks though, David.

I really am not used to writing "normally".  I always try to break the rules and experiment.  I felt a change was required.

But yes, it is prose-like (prosaic?) and it was completely intentional.

I was driving into town the either day and started to speak out loud to myself a line very similar to the first line above.

I have changed things somewhat.  My original intention was to have the man with 99 Smiles being depressed and lonely.  Like a guy who always smiles when amongst friends but is actually really depressed and is putting on a front.


Edited by James - May 20 2009 at 17:49

Yet another poem by me!  What's going on?

That's two in as many months.

Anyhow, this is a very un-James like poem and is straight-forward.  It even has a boringly generic title.  Some may even call it a prose poem.

99 Smiles

There he goes
The man with 99 smiles
Back bent
Shuffling severely
Toward the flea market
Destitute and diseased;
yet dynamic.
A denizen of back alleys
and shop fronts.
Yet he has 99 smiles
and counting.

It just goes to show
that a man without a home
can be devoid of sadness
despite having cold feet.

Geck0 - 20 May 2009



Edited by James - May 20 2009 at 17:52

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