Hi there,
Some interesting stuff in that video. I particularly liked the section beginning at 2mins40 - It is very interesting in terms of timbre, and for me, comes across much better live than some other aspects of the video. I think you are let down by sound quality a bit as i am sure the sounds mingle in a much more engaging way when hearing the music live. Not sure about the piano melodies either, they are a little dull compared to the more static and sporadic stuff. Give Edgard Varese a listen, the better parts of your music remind me of him in particular. Some of the guitar tones could be improved a little too- but maybe that is just the sound quality again. Otherwise, i really enjoyed it! Its nice that people are still exploring this kind of music. Cheers,
Jamie