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Hey James, I don't think I've asked you (or practically anybody), but would you be interested in reading one of my recent short stories to get a feel for how I write? I really appreciate honest feedback. What do you say?
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I'll do my best.  I cannot promise when I'll get around to reading it though. Big smile
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote Alitare Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: January 08 2012 at 12:42
Well, they're mostly short. I could send one to you in a personal message now and you read it when you've got the time. I doubt you'll be blown away, but you might find it somewhat entertaining.
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I don't have any space left in my inbox.  Oops.

I'll PM you with my e-mail address.
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Alright, as soon as I figure out which of my stories (there are about 20 so far) you might like most, I'll send it along your way.

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I'll send you one of my mine back in return.  Although my only really complete one isn't that great and isn't sci-fi or anything like that.
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Alright, I look forward to it. I'll have to wait to send you one of mine. The work computers here don't allow access to email services. I'll be home in  four hours or so.
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No rush mate.  I have to put some dinner on anyway.
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote The Truth Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: January 08 2012 at 13:12
Self promotion? I have never heard of such things.

There's a link in my sig if you want to see small parts of what I hope to put together in a poetry/short story volume. Big smile

I'd love to read you guys' too. Big smile
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My poetry is mostly on P.A. somewhere but I do have in a file.  Most of my prose is unfinished.

I'll be happy to forward on one of the finished pieces but it's a juvenile piece really.
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I don't actually self-promote too often. I figured it was relevant in this conversation, though.

I could message you, Truth, with something if you've got the time.
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I would't mind reading some of your stuff, either, although I probably wouldn't be too good at feedback.

I haven't written in years, but I probably still have my notebooks stuffed with lines of depression and phantasmagoria hidden in some trunk. Dunno which one, though.
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Okay, I'll send both of you the newest story I've written and come what may.
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I'd rather you didn't let May get involved.  Poor lass.
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Oh, I don't write anything perverse or disgusting (usually). I mostly fiddle with soft science/speculative fiction. I think my weakest writing points are dialogue, and 'padding'. I'm good at making beginnings and endings for ideas, but my routes from point A to B are often rough around the edges.
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Dialogue is my main issue too.  None of my characters ever sound convincing, they all have the same voice and usually have elements of me in them.
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Originally posted by Alitare Alitare wrote:

I don't actually self-promote too often. I figured it was relevant in this conversation, though.

I could message you, Truth, with something if you've got the time.


I'd love to read it given your tastes in literature. Big smile
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Alright. I'll send you the one I finished today (only one I have with me at work). I do try to follow Bradbury's belief in writing 'a story a day'. I actually end up writing half a story, forgetting it for a week, then coming back and finishing it in a different voice, which kinda sucks for continuity.
 
I'm currently working on seven short stories. One's verging on novelette, but we'll see. I try to write 5-10 pages a day. I don't force myself, so there tend to be gaps. One's about memories inside inanimate objects, another's about meeting yourself in your mind, another is a story of a jacket containing hallucinatory visions, another is a hateful little metaphor for working at stupid call centers.
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I think one of Ford's novels may appeal to you but as it's still on my to read list, I cannot say exactly whether you will or not.

The novel in question is: The Girl in the Glass

Here's the blurb from Jeff's website:

The Great Depression has bound a nation in despair -- and only a privileged few have risen above it: the exorbitantly wealthy ... and the hucksters who feed upon them. Diego, a seventeen-year-old illegal Mexican immigrant, owes his salvation to master grifter Thomas Schell. Together with Schell's gruff and powerful partner, they sail comfortably through hard times, scamming New York's grieving rich with elaborate, ingeniously staged séances -- until an impossible occurrence changes everything.

While "communing with spirits," Schell sees an image of a young girl in a pane of glass, silently entreating the con man for help. Though well aware that his otherworldly "powers" are a sham, Schell inexplicably offers his services to help find the lost child -- drawing Diego along with him into a tangled maze of deadly secrets and terrible experimentation.

At once a hypnotically compelling mystery and a stunningly evocative portrait of Depression-era New York, The Girl in the Glass is a masterly literary adventure from a writer of exemplary vision and skill.


The Girl in the Glass was the winner of The Edgar Allan Poe Award from The Mystery Writers of America in 2005 for Best Paperback Novel
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