Rust’s Review
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Topic: Rust’s Review
Posted By: Rust
Subject: Rust’s Review
Date Posted: April 03 2006 at 22:36
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I just reviewed the album Ummagumma, it says the review is by Brandonwhite78 because that is my e-mail adress. If you could critique my writing I would appreciate it, I plan on being a writer of some sort in the future and I'm just interested on if I have any talent. So tell me what you think about the review please. Thanks. ------------- We got to pump the stuff to make us tough from the heart Its astart What we need is awareness we cant get careless Mental self defensive fitness Make everybody see in order to fight the powers that be |
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Posted By: sleeper
Date Posted: April 04 2006 at 09:52
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I think its a pretty good review, I like the creative way you wrote it, explaining the imagery it evokes at the start and then moveing onto the music itself. However I think its a bit long, you could do with condensing what your saying to get the attention of more people to it. BTW, why dont you use your username Rust so we know its you next time
------------- Spending more than I should on Prog since 2005 
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Posted By: Paulieg
Date Posted: April 04 2006 at 10:03
| Good review but too long. |
Posted By: Easy Livin
Date Posted: April 04 2006 at 11:40
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I appreciate your enthusiasm for feedback, but one thread is enough! http://www.progarchives.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=21226 - http://www.progarchives.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=21226 |
