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Direct Link To This Post Posted: July 27 2008 at 05:33
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Well, it's occurred to me my thrash metal rhythm chops I had 6-7 months ago that allowed me to play very intense stuff is not quite there anymore at allEmbarrassed
I'm still very tied up with another musical project with friends, and I always like to cheap my lead chops in good shape, so time for really really practicing intense technical thrash rhythm wont be available for many months in fact.
Given that, I'll make more of a compromise I guess. Expect that my riffing will be no more technical than the early 80s thrash stuff of Kill 'Em All, Bonded By Blood and all those old records, but you can be sure the soloing is more modern sounding than that era, so audiences get to hear a blend of early and later periods of thrash in my up coming songs, so hopefully overall it comes out as sounding a bit different to stuff that was just strictly based on one era per recordThumbs%20Up

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I'm using Acoustica Beatcraft for drums and a mix of Audacity and Acoustica Mixcraft for direct guitar recording purposes.
The Acoustica stuff is nothing fancy, cheap programs that get the job done. For bass guitar, it's Guitar Pro 5Embarrassed
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: July 27 2008 at 05:46
hi Mark, heres my critique of the "test 19" song, no comments about the sound quality as you requested ( i must advise though that using electrical equipment in a bathroom is potentially dangerous..Wink).
 
i liked the Metallica-style intro, though it seemed disjointed from the main song, as if it were stuck on.  overall the song  is a good song, even though i couldn't understand a single word - the vocals were awful - reminiscent of  a drunken karaoke night, out of tune, strained, embarrassingly bad. the song justifies a good singer(s), which is the most important element(s) of a band, i suggest Bruce would fit the bill here perfectly, or someone who knows how to sing in his style.
the guitars sounded great, the rhythm and bass worked together well and sounded good, though the bass was a little indistinct (use a pick) and the drums were a let down, you need a good drum sound for metal!  
the little Maiden style lead guitar solo was good, it broke up the beat and added colour.
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: July 27 2008 at 05:57

Never heard Tubeway Army- were they big in England? Or underground punk. If the Numan is Gary Numan his pop stuff put out in the 80's was certainly heard over here.

You need to get out from under the headphones- very bad mixing levels, especially on the repetitive lead riff (was that a synth on the original). As always good playing. Some of the drums sound real and some sound synthetic. Do you use two different was to get your drums. Your vocal suited the song.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: July 27 2008 at 12:55
Originally posted by mystic fred mystic fred wrote:

hi Mark, heres my critique of the "test 19" song, no comments about the sound quality as you requested ( i must advise though that using electrical equipment in a bathroom is potentially dangerous..Wink).
 
i liked the Metallica-style intro, though it seemed disjointed from the main song, as if it were stuck on.  overall the song  is a good song, even though i couldn't understand a single word - the vocals were awful - reminiscent of  a drunken karaoke night, out of tune, strained, embarrassingly bad. the song justifies a good singer(s), which is the most important element(s) of a band, i suggest Bruce would fit the bill here perfectly, or someone who knows how to sing in his style.
the guitars sounded great, the rhythm and bass worked together well and sounded good, though the bass was a little indistinct (use a pick) and the drums were a let down, you need a good drum sound for metal!  
the little Maiden style lead guitar solo was good, it broke up the beat and added colour.
 
Embarrassed  now hit me...
 
 
Actually, the intro was stuck on... it's all in the mix, and I'm still learning about mixing.
 
The vox were all improvised in a single take - and that was my first ever attempt at singing rock. I was trying to sound like a typical rock singer of the time - listen to Holocaust demos and you'll see what I was aiming at. I don't use Antares or any other form of voice correction, and refuse to, as I can hear it at work, and hate the synthetic sound. Give me an old-fashioned out-of-tune voice any time (all singers sing flat, but good/experienced ones know how to hide that).
 
I agree, though... they were very bad. I'm actually a fully trained and experienced singer of classical styles including oratorio and opera, and have performed many big solos, including Count Almaviva in "Le Nozze di Figaro" - but as a rock singer, I know I suck - but now I've started working on it, I may improve - you never know Wink
 
The drums need mixing - they're all loops.
 
I did use a pick on the bass - the original mix (19d) was too bass heavy, and I over-compensated when I remixed.
 
 
Between the lines, though, it looked like you enjoyed the song despite its flaws, and your comments are well taken and helpful - and I may well go back and do more remixing. Maybe I can even improve my rock vocals LOL
 
 
Originally posted by cobb2 cobb2 wrote:

Never heard Tubeway Army- were they big in England? Or underground punk. If the Numan is Gary Numan his pop stuff put out in the 80's was certainly heard over here.

You need to get out from under the headphones- very bad mixing levels, especially on the repetitive lead riff (was that a synth on the original). As always good playing. Some of the drums sound real and some sound synthetic. Do you use two different was to get your drums. Your vocal suited the song.

 
It's difficult to get away from the cans - I have a 4 year-old daughter, and can only mix my music after she's gone to bed.
 
The drums are all loops taken from the same live drumming session - and all badly mixed!
 
The lead line is, guess what, badly mixed - I know. I only got 2 out of the 4 sections mixed to my satisfaction; the 2 heavy guitar sections that frame the verses and the spoken sections. The vox are way too far back in the mix - Wow - a good comment about my vocal for a change - thanks!
 
 
Did you like the song, despite not knowing it? (yes, Gary Numan fronted a band called Tubeway Army before going solo - "Are Friends Electric" was a big hit in the UK in 1979).
 
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: July 27 2008 at 23:52

Yes, I liked the song. Probably would have bought the album back then if I had heard it.

So how do you get the live drum samples integrated so well into your tunes? Is Acid that good? I'm only familiar with writing drums on a percussion line in Sonar. Do you use waves and loop them out to the length of the song and add fill waves where you need them or have you got some sort of sample keyboard?



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: July 28 2008 at 01:42
Mark if you could send me a file of the guitars only for "test19" without drums and vocals i could add a drum track for you (i have a Roland TD-12) , i know drums are usually put down first but should not be too much of a problem!
might be interesting Smile
 
 
 


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: July 28 2008 at 02:38
Originally posted by cobb2 cobb2 wrote:

Yes, I liked the song. Probably would have bought the album back then if I had heard it.

 
Replicas is an interesting album, with some great tunes on it. For my money, though, both Visage and the Human League (seriously!) released better electronic synth-pop (if "pop" is the right word for such dark music) back in '79.
 
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uu6MDdxBork Tongue
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-0WNbm1jz6A&feature=related
 
Maybe I should do this next;
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cznha2YTTh0&feature=related
 
Or this;
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SfjDgmlWLyo
(I think it'd work)
 
This?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wFDWez7c8Rc&feature=related
(I don't think so!)
 
 
Originally posted by cobb2 cobb2 wrote:

So how do you get the live drum samples integrated so well into your tunes? Is Acid that good? I'm only familiar with writing drums on a percussion line in Sonar. Do you use waves and loop them out to the length of the song and add fill waves where you need them or have you got some sort of sample keyboard?
 
Yes, ACID is that good Big%20smile - but Sonar does that as well (at least, the version I have does - I only used ACID Express because it's free, and part of the remit for this project was that the budget had to be affordable by anyone, so no-one was excluded because of finacial issues).
 
I bought the samples from Beta Monkey, who do "Acidized" beat-mapped loop libraries which are better than either my drumming or my drum programming; http://www.betamonkeymusic.com/
 
The technique is, as you say, to simply add the loop(s), cut, copy and paste as desired, then mix/add effects to taste. It's the latter that makes all my tracks sound like they have programmed drums, as I have no idea how to mix drums, especially in loops, where if you boost the kick drum, you lose the hihat, and so on - but I'm reading up on it.
 
 
I've tweaked the drums (and vox, and guitar "synth" lines) in the latest mix, and I've replaced the one that's on MySpace - I managed to get some monitor time, so it's a bit better Big%20smile
 
However, I only got half an hour, so it's all quick fixes and kludges - the sections have balance issues now, because I worked on the 4 different chunks individually and didn't have time to go back and smooth it out - but I think it sounds better overall.
 
 
QUOTE=mystic fred]Mark if you could send me a file of the guitars only for "test19" without drums and vocals i could add a drum track for you (i have a Roland TD-12) , i know drums are usually put down first but should not be too much of a problem!
might be interesting Smile
  
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Thanks - I'm not sure if you were following this project from the start (in the NWoBHM War thread, which got borked), but the initial challenge was to create a 3-track NWoBHM style demo, by yourself, in 3 months (assuming 1 hour per evening, giving roughly a day's studio time for a 5-piece band).
 
Since today is the deadline, and the challenge is over, it'd be cool to see what you can come up with - but I'd have to render each track as a beat-mapped file first, and hope the software you're using can cope with Sony's beatmapping algorithm (if you're not using ACID).
 
It'll take me a while to get that lot uploaded - can your system cope with 24-bit/96Khz WAVS, or do you need another format?
 
 


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: July 28 2008 at 03:44
" Since today is the deadline, and the challenge is over, it'd be cool to see what you can come up with - but I'd have to render each track as a beat-mapped file first, and hope the software you're using can cope with Sony's beatmapping algorithm (if you're not using ACID).
 
It'll take me a while to get that lot uploaded - can your system cope with 24-bit/96Khz WAVS, or do you need another format? "
 
 
i have Acid 4, and 24 bit sounds great, but 16 bit will do if a problem - any form will do even a WAV. file or MP3,  i can do something with those ok, the bass and guitars don't have to be on separate channels if its easier to send. 
 
 
 
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: July 29 2008 at 20:32

Marcus- I don't think you are playing fair with Certif1ed. They are full studio productions...

Brilliant stuff though.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: July 30 2008 at 04:07
^He probably hasn't been following this thread since its inception - I never said they had to be all your own work (including production) in this thread, even though I did in the original. If it's a metal demo, then it fits the criteria, I suppose Cool
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: July 30 2008 at 04:15
Well, I guess it's fair enough that Marcos posted his stuff here, although he does already have his own thread for his myspace music band, but I'm not fussed.
Anyway, well I've got my download limit back to near full, so Mark I'll download some of your stuff in a minuteThumbs%20Up

In other news, I've got some song ideas happening, ,maybe enough for about 1 and a half/2 minutes of material so far.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: July 30 2008 at 04:59
Currently I'm working on a Thrash song, but I'm still practicing rhythmical accuracy. In the last 10 years I've been playing largely for myself, never recording anything. Playing fast thrash riffs in perfect sync with the "click" is proving to be difficult.

Of course I could always use Ableton Live's warping features and record at lower speed.Evil%20Smile
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: July 30 2008 at 05:06
^Pffff, only this isn't St Anger where it was cool to just cut and paste rather than actually play it, NO CHEATING, otherwise you will be awarded the  "You are nearly as much of a douche bag as Lars Ulrich Award and this award is not a good thing" AwardLOL
I'm having the same problem to be honest, because my thrash rhythm chops are very rusty, but I might post some sloppy stuff up in the next few days for a laughTongue

Mark- Went on the myspace page and listened to the space.
Still a tad too much upper mids/treble on the guitars, but otherwise I really liked the overall production, you really made it sound classic NWOBHM, well doneClap
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: July 30 2008 at 05:22
^ I'm really a big fan of copy and paste when it comes to riffs ... saves you a lot of work. I can't see why you shouldn't do that - of course when the song finally takes form you can record it from start to finish again if you're "old-school", but during the composition process I can only recommend to anyone to simply record great riffs as you think about them, and later play around with them a bit - combine them to form songs. 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: July 30 2008 at 05:59
When it comes to constructing songs in the first place, you can't beat copy and paste - after all, the verses and choruses are going to follow pretty much the same patterns and use the same riffs.
 
All my NWoBHM tracks are copy and paste-fests - I didn't have the time to do them properly, and your tip on using it to speed up the composition process is spot-on Mike - although I truly agree with Hughes - songs should be played properly. That's not "old-school", it's making music rather than a product.
 
I tried experimenting with "Walk the Walk" last night, to see how it would stand up to being thrashed - amazingly, it worked, just by playing all the riffs with 16th-note based patterns (adding some accenting here and there to get an interesting style, not just taking the "Overkill" approach Wink), and sticking in some double bass drum loops.
 
Of course, I'd need to completely redo the vocals with a more appropriate style - should be interesting, I've never tried growling before, and my "screaming" needs a LOT of work... then there's the guitar solos, which will probably have to be Kerry King specials, since my shredding technique needs a lot more practice than I have time for.
 
The other interesting thing will be getting the 1990s guitar tones - I've been practicing getting a much more modern sound (as well as the retro late 1970s sound), and to my ears, the late 1980s/early 1990s are generally a disaster area (Metallica's self-titled album apart) for amp sounds. Alice in Chains sounded good, and the Almighty had a great sound - but everyone else seemed to use choruses to fatten the sound up - which is cheating, in my book.
 
You should first get a great sound from your amp, THEN pretty it up subtly, or bludgeon the life out of it with OTT effects - for effect only, IMO. The other thing they tended to do was massively scoop the EQ - why? Why not just cut the midrange on the amp's EQ, if that's the sound you're after? I find that BOOSTING mid on the amp and cutting bass works better anyway for a really big sound.
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: July 30 2008 at 06:51
Originally posted by MikeEnRegalia MikeEnRegalia wrote:

^ I'm really a big fan of copy and paste when it comes to riffs ... saves you a lot of work. I can't see why you shouldn't do that - of course when the song finally takes form you can record it from start to finish again if you're "old-school", but during the composition process I can only recommend to anyone to simply record great riffs as you think about them, and later play around with them a bit - combine them to form songs. 


Well, I was just talking about speeding it up as cheating, but I no you don't want that award for being a douche, so I know you wont cheatSmileTongue

I think, to give it more of a 80s thrash vibe, everyone try their best to see how long their stamina and accuracy can take them in one recordingSmile but of course I have no problem with anyone that wants to cut and paste as much as possible, I just think it takes away from the challenge a little.

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When it comes to constructing songs in the first place, you can't beat copy and paste - after all, the verses and choruses are going to follow pretty much the same patterns and use the same riffs.
 
All my NWoBHM tracks are copy and paste-fests - I didn't have the time to do them properly, and your tip on using it to speed up the composition process is spot-on Mike - although I truly agree with Hughes - songs should be played properly. That's not "old-school", it's making music rather than a product.
 
I tried experimenting with "Walk the Walk" last night, to see how it would stand up to being thrashed - amazingly, it worked, just by playing all the riffs with 16th-note based patterns (adding some accenting here and there to get an interesting style, not just taking the "Overkill" approach Wink), and sticking in some double bass drum loops.
 
Of course, I'd need to completely redo the vocals with a more appropriate style - should be interesting, I've never tried growling before, and my "screaming" needs a LOT of work... then there's the guitar solos, which will probably have to be Kerry King specials, since my shredding technique needs a lot more practice than I have time for.
 
The other interesting thing will be getting the 1990s guitar tones - I've been practicing getting a much more modern sound (as well as the retro late 1970s sound), and to my ears, the late 1980s/early 1990s are generally a disaster area (Metallica's self-titled album apart) for amp sounds. Alice in Chains sounded good, and the Almighty had a great sound - but everyone else seemed to use choruses to fatten the sound up - which is cheating, in my book.
 
You should first get a great sound from your amp, THEN pretty it up subtly, or bludgeon the life out of it with OTT effects - for effect only, IMO. The other thing they tended to do was massively scoop the EQ - why? Why not just cut the midrange on the amp's EQ, if that's the sound you're after? I find that BOOSTING mid on the amp and cutting bass works better anyway for a really big sound.
 
Any more guitar sound production tips specific to getting a good thrash sound?



Ohhhh, I've done vocals on a thrash metal song before, I just sound like I'm not taking it seriously, and that's when I actually try to do them seriouslyLOL
Well, I was actually listening to Alice In Chains yesterday, and yep, a great guitar sound Cantrell had, even if it's not thrash, I'm sure his Bogner amp he uses would be pretty much suited to any heavy style of music.
For me, I'm going to be using the Mesa Boogie amp simulations, with the mid range cut, which I think can work great on record, but never really works that well in a live situation (in band practice, I ALWAYS crank the mids), and just double/triple track of course.
For leads, I'm going for the Soldano SLO-100, which is pretty much very mid rangey sounding, and I would rather use that for leads because it just sound thin like a mid scooped amp sound would.
How much bottom end you use, is partly dependent on the pickups on your guitar.
I use a Seymour Duncan JB-4 bridge pickup, which has amazing harmonics for leads, but the bottom end it fairly loose, and you need to back off the low end for rhythm guitar to stop it mushing up (that said, the JB isn't as loose in the low end, as say some of the humbuckers fitted to many of Epiphones guitars).
Dave Mustaine used the JB throughout his career, and my guess is that his low end it slightly backed off to maintain a clearer signal path.
He now uses his own signature active pickups, and the bridge is based on the JB model, but the output is higher, and they seem to handle more bottom end without mushing out as quickly as their passive brother (I've the Mustaine Live Wire active pickup before, so I can testify to first hand experience with it and I highly recommend them for a searing metal tone).

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I've found that I always end up with the Line6 Insane model. I should even have some tones in my locker ... :-)

As far as recording is concerned: Usually you need to alter your tone a bit ... if it sounds good on its own, without any other instruments, it will probably have way too much bass. Boost the mid range and remove most of the bass ... of course here the Gearbox plug in comes in handy, as you often find out later that the settings should be different. If you take away too much during recording, you can't put it back in later - of course you can boost the eq, but that degrades the sound quality.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: July 30 2008 at 07:41
^Have you downloaded the "Wherever I May Roam" Tone into your locker? I d/l'd loads of Line6 tones, but that's the one I always fall back to for seriously heavy riffs. Sounds great with EMGs Big%20smile
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: July 30 2008 at 08:31
Heh - I was just listening to the 1,000,000th Metal band that sound like Fear Factory on Garageband, and was reminded of this; http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ycjVSyDVQM
 
 
 
Suddenly, my cover of "Are Friends Electric" doesn't sound so bad - and FF had Gary Numan himself to help them. LOL
 
Might have a go at "Cars" myself - obviously, without the synths.


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