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How about these lyrics?

Genesis - "Looking for Someone"   (excerpt)

Looking for someone, I guess I'm doing that
Trying to find a memory in a dark room
Dirty man, you're looking like a Buddha, I know you well

Keep on a straight line, I don't believe I can,
Trying to find a needle in a haystack,
Chilly wind you're piercing like a dagger, it hurts me so.

Nobody needs to discover me, I'm back again.
You see the sunlight through the trees, to keep you warm in peaceful shades of green
Yet in the darkness of my mind Damascus wasn't far behind.

(from the album Trespass (1970))

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Brave new world
Just around the corner
I wonder
How happy we will be
Can we prevent it?




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If a woman is fickle,
Give her a tickle,
Hold her waist tightly,
Do it twice nightly. 


- Ken Dodd


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Weell, how tickled I am! Big smile

and very much welcome in this thread! Tongue
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote David_D Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: September 28 2022 at 08:22

Some more of the ideological 70's lyrics:

Emerson, Lake & Palmer - "Tarkus: Battlefield"  (excerpt)

Clear the battlefield and let me see
All the profit from our victory.
You talk of freedom, starving children fall.
Are you deaf when you hear the season's call?

Were you there to watch the earth be scorched?
Did you stand beside the spectral torch?
Know the leaves of sorrow turned their face,
Scattered on the ashes of disgrace.

(from the album Tarkus (1971))

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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote David_D Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: September 28 2022 at 08:36

and here maybe a bit unusual suggestion for interpretation:

"I see a meaning of rebirth and redemption in this song. Tarkus lives a vicious, violent life and does not realize that it is being lived wrong [Stones of Years]. When he is defeated by the Manticore, he realizes his violent ways were not the right path- violence does not help. it only ends up hurting- he hurt himself and those he fought. So, he redeems himself- he goes into the sea, a completely new machine. At the end of Aquatarkus, the same music from Eruption is played- Tarkus has been born anew. That's just my take on it, seems good IMO. I love this song, it's 20 minutes and never boring. Epic."

written by Aquatarkus, April 17, 2009 on songmeanings.com

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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote David_D Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: September 30 2022 at 09:58

How about a bit of Swedish 90´s lyrics from the excellent Vemod (1993):

Anekdoten - "The Old Man & The Sea"   (excerpt)

 The storm has raged here for hours
The water's plunging in on me
The remains of my creation
Is swallowed slowly down
By the troubled sea
Into unconsecrated ground
Gone eternally, gone eternally

Feeder of my visions
Carrier of my soul
The last hope for the dreamers
Now crashing to the shore
Pinioned and torn
In presumption and with my foolish pride
I challenged the storm, I challenged the storm

- not so optimistic.


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Some interesting modern lyrics are written by Mariusz Duda of Riverside fame on the first album of his solo project, 
the selftitled Lunatic Soul from 2008. 
He seems to be occupied by the idea of afterlife/reincarnation, but it obviously gives him some problems:

 Lunatic Soul - "The Final Truth"   (excerpt)

 So what will survive of me
A cardboard box with thoughts inside
What will survive of me
My little escapes from real life
What will survive
And what will I take
To the land of the endless ones

If I sever the past
It will be so dark here

When I met The Ferryman
He smiled to me
Could swear I saw this smile before
"You have to choose" - he said
"And then you may return
You'll get another chance to revive
If you decide to keep
Your memories from the past
By all else, you must be forgotten
If you let me take your mind
If you let me take your soul
In their hearts you'll stay forever
Your choice


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Originally posted by David_D David_D wrote:


I should maybe tell that it's not allowed for PA to quote whole songs, only excerpts. Smile


Hi,

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Hi,

Here you go ... 

POSTED WITH PERMISSION BY THE AUTHOR WHO HAS GAINED NOT ONE CENT IN 33 YEARS FROM THIS POEM!

(WRITTEN IN 1989)

You,
 ...
 are no longer a vision.
 ...
 Or a poem.
 
 There was a day,
 and many a night,
 of wonder,
 of hope,
 of waiting,
 and perhaps
 of expecting,...
 and, I have often felt,
 ..'what daring'..
 have I,
 to stand and think,
 much less,... even more,
 write a poem,
 of hope,
 prayer like,
 that one day this will
 all come to happen,
 somehow,
 amid all the daily
 ...
 events
 ...
 and rotten repercussions
 of doubt and belief,
 some mine,
 most by others,
 that,
 ...
 somehow, in some way,
 I would one day
 stand up
 across your path,
 and blatantly
 tell you, that,
 ...
 I loved you.
 
 And you might say,
 ...
 do you know me?
 ...
 
 
 And I'll say,
 ...
 what is there to know,
 that can't be proved
 by your being,
 and,
 standing here,
 ...
 
 I had to grow,
 you had to see,
 I had to learn,
 you had to be,
 and now,
 as the end of the past
 nears,
 ever so softly,
 I can finally
 see your eyes,
 truly,
 ...
 fully,
 ...
 and feel
 what can't possibly
 ever,
 be felt by many,
 but the lucky few,
 ...
 chosen ones,
 ...
 yes,...You,
 ...
 are no longer a vision.
 Or even a poem.
 
 And from my dream
 of our climb
 along the many splendour'd
 shaft of light
 shall the truth of truths
 forever be born,
 that no one can ever
 cast a side glance of doubt
 over the power of hope,
 or of love,
 and of care,
 ...
 (yes, I have cared,.)
 ...
 and of trust,
 Oh yes, trust,
 that indomitable faith,
 which can make
 or break all of us
 into worthless, unhappy beings
 whose desires are
 masters of oblivion,
 and reality is but
 a shadow of what
 it all could
 and should,
 ...
 forever be.
 
 Sure it was hard.
 
 And, it was painful.
 But worth it.
 For in one second,
 all that ever was,
 only but a vision,
 perhaps a hope or two,
 and a wondrous sight,
 is now,
 so true,
 so clear,
 so perfect,
 and so inspiring,
 that I'm not sure
 that there even exist
 in this unfathomable idea
 of eternal time and space,
 enough ink and lead
 to describe you,
 ...
 or
 ...
 enough notes, scales and instruments
 to
 ...
 to surround you,
 ...
 or
 ...
 enough paints and canvases
 to delineate you,
 ...
 which will truly describe
 the feelings
 not even a second long
 of a vision within a vision
 which is,
 an incarnate truth,
 ...
 a specialized moment,
 ...
 of unbearable joys,
 ...
 when all time stands still,
 ...
 
 and shines,...
 oh yes, it shines,...
 ever so brightly,...
 when it finally can be said,
 once and for all,
 You ( my dear)
 ...
 Are no longer a vision.
 ...
 Or, even, a poem.
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When I was young
the world was quite different around me
when the music's over
it's just big sleep.

Birth of a poet 
how would that be
like Electric Music for the Mind and Body?


Edited by David_D - October 03 2022 at 06:30
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retrospection, fragment two

                                    obeying constipation 
                 four thousandth moose 
                               in search of loose spoons 
        table talks to refrigerator 
                                      "speed of 
   simulation 
                                popcorn 
                                        tugboat 
                                                                                           scrutinize little words 
           and postage never used 
                      in the south moluccas" 

sniffing icicles 
            fungae days 
                                                                                                                        extraterrestrial pickles 
                                vulgar vacuums 
                i smell like stars 
                        and leave hangers in my clothes 
                                            and claim pear stems 
                                                        and write letters to ironing boards 
                       inside the bicycle pump 
                                      i remember 
                                                   but i forget 
           what pants? 

                                        sextic polynomials 
                        cookie crumbs and shaddocks 
                                                                                      bopperpogs and demented diapers 
        what am i talking about? 
                                i've asked this before 
only to get trunkhose in return 
                                       flowing truncated triangles 
             dodecahedron inside a trumpet shell 
                           flywheel tongues 
                                               compoundable cocoons 
                                                                                masters of toast 
                                                                                                        barking at dots on paper 
                                                                                                                             ytterbic phone cord 
                   it forgot to return with a soda
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this car smells like cartilage
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thanks for the new poems
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Nothingface
without future
without grace

Every morning, every warning
In the darkness of the night
a lot of fight

If he knew 
what to do
it still wouldn't be easy

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In the jungle of a city
a neglected wife and depressed widow man
a wrong train to the right station?

A wrong lunch box
to the right man
a lot of letters
how good can that be...and yet

The way of life
or a good story?

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Waiting for the sun
that will never come
what a waste of time

Much better
write a letter
or f**k it all 

If confused
can be used
don't worry, be happy

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Some more lyrics from the 80's, yet now from the other end of the 80's than the previous ones. Actually, I've already
quoted them in another thread, but I find them to be so good, so it's very okay to repeat them here.

 Voivod  - "The Unknown Knows"   (excerpt)

Talk to me you flying shadows
Wandering into the ozone stew
Keep your myths from the embryos
Who would misconstrue
Anything new
An outright official fiasco
Can you shiled me
From the drastic truth

(From the album Nothingface (1989))

Voivod, a Canadian band formed in 1982, was born in Jonquiére, a town with pulp, paper and aluminium factories 
churned unceasingly, spewing smoke and generating a perpetual mechanical din. The drummer, Michel Langevin, 
could have nightmares because of the sounds from these factories, and the band's lyrics are much about something 
industrial, mechanical and cold.


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Grown ups
acting like children
twenty first century fox
age of populism
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painting black
not good for the stomach
neither for the head
it ain't easy
to turn it back
but it happens



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painting black
what the heck
pay attention to it
and it ain't that black
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