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    Posted: January 15 2017 at 20:04
Hi There Everybody! I'm Jeremykeys. I'm an old fart. 61 years of age. I've been playing for most of my life and I'm an adequate keyboard player. I've always loved progressive rock and like to write in that style. I also play adequate guitar and 5 string bass. Here's my latest work in progress.

https://soundcloud.com/jeremykeys/happily-sedated

Hope you like it. My wife thought I was listening to some famous band on the internet when I was working on this this weekend. She grew up on old Genesis.

Please have a good listen and I'm okay with constructive criticism. Please hit the little "heart" button. Even if you don't like it!Wink

I'm good with that!
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Points: 64354 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: January 15 2017 at 20:14
Originally posted by Jeremykeys Jeremykeys wrote:

Hi There Everybody! I'm Jeremykeys. I'm an old fart. 61 years of age. I've been playing for most of my life and I'm an adequate keyboard player. I've always loved progressive rock and like to write in that style. I also play adequate guitar and 5 string bass. Here's my latest work in progress.

https://soundcloud.com/jeremykeys/happily-sedated

It's fairly good for homemade, I can hear the Gen influence.   As for critical observations, I'd say make sure your tempo is solid, the dynamics between drums, keys and guitar, and that everything is flawlessly intoned.   The material is decent and the mix pretty convincing, so it'll be dynamics that will make the difference.

A lot of work, though.  Well done.
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