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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 02 2014 at 00:58
Originally posted by TradeMark0 TradeMark0 wrote:

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Originally posted by Gerinski Gerinski wrote:

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Well, the thing is coherence is just a plain English word and moreover not one that is connected to moods or emotions.  So what is coherent to the artist cannot be incoherent to the listener unless the artist is grossly incompetent or the listener has a very poor understanding of music.


I wouldn't use a term as strong as "grossly incompetent". It's a spectrum. Assuming a band is not deliberately trying to create a bad or incoherent album, whether or not most listeners will also hear it as coherent is on the skill of the band. Which can range from dreadful to average to genius, and is a combination of the inherent talent of the members and their experience working together. If the majority of listeners feel that an album doesn't fit well together, it's not the audience's fault -- the band simply did not do a good enough job of expressing their vision.


I don't think the majority argument would be accurate. There is always the possibility that the majority isn't properly judging the album, which leads to another question. How do you properly judge an album? Unlike literature or films, there aren't many concrete ideas for which you can base musical criticism on. Incoherence would be a criticism of the overall composition of the album, but we would need to understand what makes a composition effective in the first place.

The argument has been brought up before, but it fits here as well: the majority of the listeners may indeed not be the right group to judge how good or bad an album is. People like those who triggered me to start this topic seem to dismiss an album (or even a single track) on first or second hearing, with 'lack of coherence' as an argument, while others just keep the music playing for a couple of days or weeks, sometimes months, to find out if and when the 'click' will come that makes it all fit together. That is a completely different approach to music: for the first group it has to work on first listen, which in the case of prog will not work very often because the overall genre is simply to broad, for others there are other quality characteristics that take time to (unconsciously) judge. 

At least the guy who triggered me to start this topic had the decency to say 'this album doesn't work for me', instead of 'this album is crap'. When we start judging all music by the 'it has to work the first time' standard, there's a lot of music at risk. 
However, that is not the same as establishing a Spanish Inquisition for music, as Kati suggests. Better to have people make their own choice in music, but also to have them refrain from judging the music without generalising their own interpretation of it.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 02 2014 at 01:28
^ making you opinion sound as if it has some objective basis is one of the great 'tricks' that people try to pull off in music criticism. At the end of the day its mostly subjective but we can obviously argue around that basic point forever and a day because we are PASmile
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 02 2014 at 04:52
Let's do that then ;-)
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 02 2014 at 07:32
Originally posted by Angelo Angelo wrote:

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Originally posted by richardh richardh wrote:

^ making you opinion sound as if it has some objective basis is one of the great 'tricks' that people try to pull off in music criticism. At the end of the day its mostly subjective but we can obviously argue around that basic point forever and a day because we are PASmile
I'm not so sure. Another thing is that most of us don't have the skills for describing in more technical or accurate terms what we experience with the music.

We may be fond of saying that Prog is a genre with a lot of artistic freedom, but if we exclude the most experimental, avantgarde, RIO etc stuff, the reality is that most Prog still conforms to many traditional musical forms and rules (except the 4 minutes max one Wink). A good musician knows how to evoke certain emotions, moods, atmospheres, how to build tension and how to resolve it successfully, how to create drama, climax, relief, melancholy, joy, sadness, gradual depression into bottom hell, how to create mystery, how to concatenate different elements successfully and so on and on and on. From this point of view an album can be like a sonic novel, but in order to be so the elements need to be arranged in a certain order which follow a certain logic. In a good novel you will not expect to have tension building suddenly followed by melancholy without any previous resolution to the tension's climax, you will not put the tension peak before the building of the tension, nor sadness right after joy without inserting some cause for the shift from joy to sadness in between.

From this point of view an album may sound incoherent if the elements are arranged in such a way which seem not to make sense. It can certainly be done so intentionally, the artist is certainly free to do it, but I suspect that there are also cases where when this happens is because the musician was not skillful or careful enough.

The very good movie soundtrack specialists are masters at all these techniques precisely because the music has to follow the movie plot, so we will rarely hear a movie soundtrack and perceive it as 'incoherent' (at least in the way it actually plays in the movie, soundtracks on album frequently are not exactly the same as in the movie).

I'm sure a very good musician, on hearing an album could tell us a lot about it using entirely objective arguments. We (I mean myself at least) lack those skills so we are content in saying that it's impossible to objectivitize our impressions from the music and that it's all subjective after all, but I think that's in big part only a consequence of our limitations. We as Prog lovers are surely much more open to experimentation and to unusual musical forms and rules that most casual music listeners, but we are humans after all and I guess that our brain still react as expected to many traditional musical triggers, and that we have a certain degree of mental 'coherence' Wink which still expects the triggered reactions to form some more or less logical patterns in our brain.


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 02 2014 at 08:26
Originally posted by Gerinski Gerinski wrote:

That's true, incoherence is a word which applies better to things or processes which involve some rational logic and interconnection between their components, such as writing. It is easy to tell when we read something incoherent, we have trouble tying the knots and making sense of what is trying to be told, we find contradictions in the different elements or the required logic is violated. I'm not sure if we should expect music to bear also some degree of rationality or not. Perhaps there lies the question, people who do not expect any rationality from music and expect only a triggering of assorted emotions will find the term 'incoherent' not applicable for music, but people who expect a certain degree of rationality in a musical work may perceive incoherence when they can not find it.

I am not sure we can generalise that way about all writing.  I would not label stream-of-consciousness writing such as James Joyce as incoherent even if it is not the kind of writing I particularly enjoy reading.  Likewise when I attempted to read Salman Rushdie's Midnight's Children, I found his style of employing frequent back and forths in the narrative and exploring tangents distracting and gave up.  But I would hardly call it incoherent.  It was a technique such writers began to employ because the conventional, ultra-linear 19th century novel had run its course.  I think the act of labelling a work of art that is otherwise professionally and competently rendered only because its structure doesn't seem to fit some pre conceived notions held by the audience, lacks a necessary benefit of doubt required to account for the subjective dimensions of art.  Speaking of which, I don't know that there is any evidently rational way of appreciating music.  I do know that people are quite capable of seeking rationalisations for their opinions.  Which is fine and I don't care if it makes them want to call a particular album incoherent, but if asked I would have to point out the problems with such an approach.   
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 02 2014 at 13:26
Originally posted by Gerinski Gerinski wrote:

Originally posted by Angelo Angelo wrote:

Let's do that then ;-)
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Originally posted by richardh richardh wrote:

^ making you opinion sound as if it has some objective basis is one of the great 'tricks' that people try to pull off in music criticism. At the end of the day its mostly subjective but we can obviously argue around that basic point forever and a day because we are PASmile
I'm not so sure. Another thing is that most of us don't have the skills for describing in more technical or accurate terms what we experience with the music.

We may be fond of saying that Prog is a genre with a lot of artistic freedom, but if we exclude the most experimental, avantgarde, RIO etc stuff, the reality is that most Prog still conforms to many traditional musical forms and rules (except the 4 minutes max one Wink). A good musician knows how to evoke certain emotions, moods, atmospheres, how to build tension and how to resolve it successfully, how to create drama, climax, relief, melancholy, joy, sadness, gradual depression into bottom hell, how to create mystery, how to concatenate different elements successfully and so on and on and on. From this point of view an album can be like a sonic novel, but in order to be so the elements need to be arranged in a certain order which follow a certain logic. In a good novel you will not expect to have tension building suddenly followed by melancholy without any previous resolution to the tension's climax, you will not put the tension peak before the building of the tension, nor sadness right after joy without inserting some cause for the shift from joy to sadness in between.

From this point of view an album may sound incoherent if the elements are arranged in such a way which seem not to make sense. It can certainly be done so intentionally, the artist is certainly free to do it, but I suspect that there are also cases where when this happens is because the musician was not skillful or careful enough.

The very good movie soundtrack specialists are masters at all these techniques precisely because the music has to follow the movie plot, so we will rarely hear a movie soundtrack and perceive it as 'incoherent' (at least in the way it actually plays in the movie, soundtracks on album frequently are not exactly the same as in the movie).

I'm sure a very good musician, on hearing an album could tell us a lot about it using entirely objective arguments. We (I mean myself at least) lack those skills so we are content in saying that it's impossible to objectivitize our impressions from the music and that it's all subjective after all, but I think that's in big part only a consequence of our limitations. We as Prog lovers are surely much more open to experimentation and to unusual musical forms and rules that most casual music listeners, but we are humans after all and I guess that our brain still react as expected to many traditional musical triggers, and that we have a certain degree of mental 'coherence' Wink which still expects the triggered reactions to form some more or less logical patterns in our brain.

Ultimately whether you like something or not (which everyone can determine regardless of their writing skills) will drive your opinion. You cannot force yourself to like something you don't like.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 02 2014 at 13:52
Originally posted by Gerinski Gerinski wrote:

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I'm not so sure. Another thing is that most of us don't have the skills for describing in more technical or accurate terms what we experience with the music.

That's the main reason why I do not use the expressions as to what style it is ... heck, I still can't figure out what neo is! 

To me, it is about the inner experience for me and nothing else, and this, of course, encompasses so many "styles" that it is scary ... I had someone comment once that they didn't know how I could like hard rock and folk music! I did not comment at all. It is what it is! 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 02 2014 at 13:58
Originally posted by rogerthat rogerthat wrote:

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 It was a technique such writers began to employ because the conventional, ultra-linear 19th century novel had run its course.  I think the act of labelling a work of art that is otherwise professionally and competently rendered only because its structure doesn't seem to fit some pre conceived notions held by the audience, lacks a necessary benefit of doubt required to account for the subjective dimensions of art.  
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I'm not sure that it was a "technique". The surrealists even went so far as to express to you that it didn't matter if it made sense or not, and of course two small films still stand up 85 years later or so, as a powerful example of that, although one could say that these "scenes" were setup with ideas, so it could be filmed. 

Writing, as for me, is hard to describe, because I have no idea what is happening until I'm done and read it later. It is only then, that I know what I wrote, which (of course) sometimes makes it difficult here on the board, but for creative writing is an excellent tool. It is all about the flow of what is flying around and being "translated", and has less to do with ideas than we imagine.

The whole "ideas" thing, usually comes later. This is the case, and the situation with so much music!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 02 2014 at 14:03
Originally posted by moshkito moshkito wrote:

Originally posted by Gerinski Gerinski wrote:

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I'm not so sure. Another thing is that most of us don't have the skills for describing in more technical or accurate terms what we experience with the music.

That's the main reason why I do not use the expressions as to what style it is ... heck, I still can't figure out what neo is! 

To me, it is about the inner experience for me and nothing else, and this, of course, encompasses so many "styles" that it is scary ... I had someone comment once that they didn't know how I could like hard rock and folk music! I did not comment at all. It is what it is! 


Many musicians feel this way. They learn so many different styles of music and sort of dislike the fact that a tag has been placed upon the music to categorize it. Maybe that alone makes it easier for society to digest. I do not know the real reason for it beyond what I've just stated and to myself and the many musicians around me, it's simply music being music. So, when you're a devoted musician ...you sometimes feel a bit nervous over category terms placed on a style of music and it's logical because you play it! It's uncomfortable to even think about, but then again...what do you do when you're in conversation and how do you communicate with others without those terms or labels and expect for them to understand?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 02 2014 at 14:13
Originally posted by richardh richardh wrote:

Originally posted by Gerinski Gerinski wrote:

Originally posted by Angelo Angelo wrote:

Let's do that then ;-)
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[QUOTE=richardh]^ making you opinion sound as if it has some objective basis is one of the great 'tricks' that people try to pull off in music criticism. At the end of the day its mostly subjective but we can obviously argue around that basic point forever and a day because we are PASmile
 
Ultimately whether you like something or not (which everyone can determine regardless of their writing skills) will drive your opinion. You cannot force yourself to like something you don't like.
Anyone who makes music part of their daily life being it listening or playing can clearly distinguish what they particularly enjoy.
The matter in this topic coherence, we all agree that everyone has their own perception of what it means, while agreeing or not. What is in question here is the reviewers articulate skills to convey in describing it, making others understand why he/she thinks it's coherence or not.
 
My music taste varies a lot, i.e. a few all time big favorite bands by others I feel indifferent and rather listen to other early or recent bands that I feel passionate about. I tend to prefer instrumentals, most singers I don't particularly like, also some songs I feel like I am listening to a sermon, being dictated what importance the words have within that song instead of letting me decide where my imagination takes me.  
 
As a listener and moozik aficionado, I only review what I like and leave objective criticism to the "ProgReviewers". 
While writing a review, I try my best to share MY listening experience (as a listener) to others so that they hopefully may feel what I am feeling at that time, sometimes listening to a particular album makes me so happy, gives me a wonderful feeling inside with beautiful highs and lows, thrilling and/or also the awwww...'s :( sad beautiful tunes, it all varies and I need such stimulus or my mind wonders away very quickly.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 02 2014 at 14:21

^^ I can and have reviewed film, I can review books,

but despite music being my greatest love of the holy trinity - I wouldn't dare do a review because I love music on such a personal, hardwired level, i'm not sure that I can articulate why I like something or not.
I'm positive I can't.
 
And because it's so damn personal to me I can only assume that it's the same for everyone else - and I couldn't dare say anything negative about someone else's love.
It would be like saying their kids are ugly
 
Plus i'm just not that knowledgeable because I listen with my heart, not my head.
I don't research and I don't care to. (I do with film)
 
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 02 2014 at 14:45
Originally posted by Walton Street Walton Street wrote:

 
I couldn't dare say anything negative about someone else's love. It would be like saying their kids are ugly 
I have dared to tell friends that I didn't like their kids and I guess I will never do it again Embarrassed Honestly has some limits to politeness.
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Originally posted by Gerinski Gerinski wrote:

Originally posted by Walton Street Walton Street wrote:

 
I couldn't dare say anything negative about someone else's love. It would be like saying their kids are ugly 
I have dared to tell friends that I didn't like their kids and I guess I will never do it again Embarrassed Honestly has some limits to politeness.
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 02 2014 at 17:27
Originally posted by rogerthat rogerthat wrote:

Originally posted by Gerinski Gerinski wrote:

That's true, incoherence is a word which applies better to things or processes which involve some rational logic and interconnection between their components, such as writing. It is easy to tell when we read something incoherent, we have trouble tying the knots and making sense of what is trying to be told, we find contradictions in the different elements or the required logic is violated. I'm not sure if we should expect music to bear also some degree of rationality or not. Perhaps there lies the question, people who do not expect any rationality from music and expect only a triggering of assorted emotions will find the term 'incoherent' not applicable for music, but people who expect a certain degree of rationality in a musical work may perceive incoherence when they can not find it.


I am not sure we can generalise that way about all writing.  I would not label stream-of-consciousness writing such as James Joyce as incoherent even if it is not the kind of writing I particularly enjoy reading.  Likewise when I attempted to read Salman Rushdie's Midnight's Children, I found his style of employing frequent back and forths in the narrative and exploring tangents distracting and gave up.  But I would hardly call it incoherent.  It was a technique such writers began to employ because the conventional, ultra-linear 19th century novel had run its course.  I think the act of labelling a work of art that is otherwise professionally and competently rendered only because its structure doesn't seem to fit some pre conceived notions held by the audience, lacks a necessary benefit of doubt required to account for the subjective dimensions of art.  Speaking of which, I don't know that there is any evidently rational way of appreciating music.  I do know that people are quite capable of seeking rationalisations for their opinions.  Which is fine and I don't care if it makes them want to call a particular album incoherent, but if asked I would have to point out the problems with such an approach.   

I really can't stand the general 'it's subjective, we can't talk about it' rhetoric when it comes up. It probably has a lot to do with me being a cognitive science researcher in real life. A cognitive scientist taking that view is tantamount to closing up shop. Stream of Consciousness writing is weird in its origin as well as it's content. It's based on a theory of literature and communication - Deconstructivism - that rejects structure as argued for in Semiotics. It offers a very problematic view of meaning that has made it a total flop as a theory of communication. Deconstructivism has been successful in that it has spawned new art forms. Stream of Consciousness writing is one of them (it's also had some influence in architecture). I would argue that it has only succeeded in creating new alternative structures, which would be a sign of internal failure since it sets out to reject all structure, though one can certainly (attempt to) appreciate its qualities without accepting the theoretical presumptions behind it. Stream of Consciousness is coherent though, just with non-standard schemas. This is strange territory indeed.

Beyond that, I have to agree with most everyone that talented discriminating musicians are unlikely to produce an incoherent album. This doesn't mean that incoherence is logically impossible, just that it doesn't have much application to reviewing music, which is admittedly what this thread is about. My interest is more in the thought processes of creating music (speaking as an amateur guitarist).

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 02 2014 at 18:52
Originally posted by richardh richardh wrote:

Ultimately whether you like something or not (which everyone can determine regardless of their writing skills) will drive your opinion. You cannot force yourself to like something you don't like.


I disagree with this. my musical taste has been constantly changing for about 3 years now. I didn't even like prog back then. My opinion on an album can often change when I hear the opinions of others. There has been times when I have seen a lot of negative criticism towards albums I really like and they often change the way I view an album; however, it only works if they make convincing arguments and point out flaws and often those flaws will become much more noticeable to the point of making me dislike the album. It works the other way around as well there have been albums that I didn't like but others praised and made convincing arguments as to why it is so good. I would eventually give the album more try's and I would grow to really like it. I've always considered it to be maturing my taste in music. This is why I am open to others criticizing my musical taste unless it's something I strongly disagree with. In which case, would gladly take the challenge of debating with them.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 02 2014 at 19:22
Originally posted by HackettFan HackettFan wrote:

Originally posted by rogerthat rogerthat wrote:

Originally posted by Gerinski Gerinski wrote:

That's true, incoherence is a word which applies better to things or processes which involve some rational logic and interconnection between their components, such as writing. It is easy to tell when we read something incoherent, we have trouble tying the knots and making sense of what is trying to be told, we find contradictions in the different elements or the required logic is violated. I'm not sure if we should expect music to bear also some degree of rationality or not. Perhaps there lies the question, people who do not expect any rationality from music and expect only a triggering of assorted emotions will find the term 'incoherent' not applicable for music, but people who expect a certain degree of rationality in a musical work may perceive incoherence when they can not find it.


I am not sure we can generalise that way about all writing.  I would not label stream-of-consciousness writing such as James Joyce as incoherent even if it is not the kind of writing I particularly enjoy reading.  Likewise when I attempted to read Salman Rushdie's Midnight's Children, I found his style of employing frequent back and forths in the narrative and exploring tangents distracting and gave up.  But I would hardly call it incoherent.  It was a technique such writers began to employ because the conventional, ultra-linear 19th century novel had run its course.  I think the act of labelling a work of art that is otherwise professionally and competently rendered only because its structure doesn't seem to fit some pre conceived notions held by the audience, lacks a necessary benefit of doubt required to account for the subjective dimensions of art.  Speaking of which, I don't know that there is any evidently rational way of appreciating music.  I do know that people are quite capable of seeking rationalisations for their opinions.  Which is fine and I don't care if it makes them want to call a particular album incoherent, but if asked I would have to point out the problems with such an approach.   

I really can't stand the general 'it's subjective, we can't talk about it' rhetoric when it comes up. It probably has a lot to do with me being a cognitive science researcher in real life. A cognitive scientist taking that view is tantamount to closing up shop. Stream of Consciousness writing is weird in its origin as well as it's content. It's based on a theory of literature and communication - Deconstructivism - that rejects structure as argued for in Semiotics. It offers a very problematic view of meaning that has made it a total flop as a theory of communication. Deconstructivism has been successful in that it has spawned new art forms. Stream of Consciousness writing is one of them (it's also had some influence in architecture). I would argue that it has only succeeded in creating new alternative structures, which would be a sign of internal failure since it sets out to reject all structure, though one can certainly (attempt to) appreciate its qualities without accepting the theoretical presumptions behind it. Stream of Consciousness is coherent though, just with non-standard schemas. This is strange territory indeed.

Beyond that, I have to agree with most everyone that talented discriminating musicians are unlikely to produce an incoherent album. This doesn't mean that incoherence is logically impossible, just that it doesn't have much application to reviewing music, which is admittedly what this thread is about. My interest is more in the thought processes of creating music (speaking as an amateur guitarist).

I never said either that "it's ALL subjective" or that "we can't talk about it".  Next time read carefully.  I did say we cannot generalise on all writing.  Which is a valid statement.  We cannot indiscriminately apply one fixed set of rules to all writing based on the ones that apply to our favourite style/styles.  Same goes for music as well.  I would say there is no one size fits all framework to criticise even music in one style but that's a different discussion.  

You can say what's wrong if say a listener completely refuses to take into account that Hindustani music has no harmony and has, unlike Western classical, a lot of improvisation and simply forms an opinion by applying Western norms.  Well, indeed there's nothing wrong as such and it's not a crime but such an opinion also holds very little informative value, only serves to perhaps reinforce pre-conceived notions and is ultimately the listener's loss rather than the artist's.   
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 02 2014 at 19:45
Originally posted by HackettFan HackettFan wrote:

Originally posted by rogerthat rogerthat wrote:

Originally posted by Gerinski Gerinski wrote:

That's true, incoherence is a word which applies better to things or processes which involve some rational logic and interconnection between their components, such as writing. It is easy to tell when we read something incoherent, we have trouble tying the knots and making sense of what is trying to be told, we find contradictions in the different elements or the required logic is violated. I'm not sure if we should expect music to bear also some degree of rationality or not. Perhaps there lies the question, people who do not expect any rationality from music and expect only a triggering of assorted emotions will find the term 'incoherent' not applicable for music, but people who expect a certain degree of rationality in a musical work may perceive incoherence when they can not find it.


I am not sure we can generalise that way about all writing.  I would not label stream-of-consciousness writing such as James Joyce as incoherent even if it is not the kind of writing I particularly enjoy reading.  Likewise when I attempted to read Salman Rushdie's Midnight's Children, I found his style of employing frequent back and forths in the narrative and exploring tangents distracting and gave up.  But I would hardly call it incoherent.  It was a technique such writers began to employ because the conventional, ultra-linear 19th century novel had run its course.  I think the act of labelling a work of art that is otherwise professionally and competently rendered only because its structure doesn't seem to fit some pre conceived notions held by the audience, lacks a necessary benefit of doubt required to account for the subjective dimensions of art.  Speaking of which, I don't know that there is any evidently rational way of appreciating music.  I do know that people are quite capable of seeking rationalisations for their opinions.  Which is fine and I don't care if it makes them want to call a particular album incoherent, but if asked I would have to point out the problems with such an approach.   

I really can't stand the general 'it's subjective, we can't talk about it' rhetoric when it comes up. It probably has a lot to do with me being a cognitive science researcher in real life. A cognitive scientist taking that view is tantamount to closing up shop. Stream of Consciousness writing is weird in its origin as well as it's content. It's based on a theory of literature and communication - Deconstructivism - that rejects structure as argued for in Semiotics. It offers a very problematic view of meaning that has made it a total flop as a theory of communication. Deconstructivism has been successful in that it has spawned new art forms. Stream of Consciousness writing is one of them (it's also had some influence in architecture). I would argue that it has only succeeded in creating new alternative structures, which would be a sign of internal failure since it sets out to reject all structure, though one can certainly (attempt to) appreciate its qualities without accepting the theoretical presumptions behind it. Stream of Consciousness is coherent though, just with non-standard schemas. This is strange territory indeed.

Beyond that, I have to agree with most everyone that talented discriminating musicians are unlikely to produce an incoherent album. This doesn't mean that incoherence is logically impossible, just that it doesn't have much application to reviewing music, which is admittedly what this thread is about. My interest is more in the thought processes of creating music (speaking as an amateur guitarist).
 
There is an audience within an audience that an artist is concerned with. It is the group the artist is primarily concerned in reaching. If a person of middling reading comprehension stumbles upon a copy of Joyce's Finnegan's Wake, that reader most likely will consider Joyce's story gibberish, illegible and completely unreadable. However, give the same book to someone who has a background in literature, and they will more than likely "get" the neologisms, word puns, portmanteau and thousands of historical, biblical and literary allusions that fill the book.
 
Finnegan's Wake is written in stream-of-consciousness style, it is a dream narrative, and the first sentence starts approximately where the final sentence of the book ends, so it is a never-ending cycle. To the untrained eye, the book seems to be a random, grammatically-botched hodgepodge, but literary greats and linguists like Samuel Beckett, Anthony Burgess, Joseph Campbell and Northrop Frye have all studied it extensively. But I digress.
 
Back to an audience within and audience. There are those shallow performers who pander to the lowest common denominator, but as we are referring to progressive music I think we can dismiss such lowbrow music with the disdain it deserves. Coherence/incoherence is in the ears or eyes of the beholder in many cases. Common folk were shocked on the first hearing of Stravinsky's Rite of Spring, and even a formidable art critic such as John Ruskin subjectively panned Whistler's masterpiece The Falling Rocket (Nocturne in Black and Gold), saying:
 
"I have seen and heard much of cockney impudence before now; but never expected to hear a coxcomb ask two hundred guineas for flinging a pot of paint in the public's face."
 
In rock music, coherency is obviously as subjective as the preferences we hold. Jon Anderson is hailed for his lyrical flights of fancy, but just as often derided for uttering New Age gobbledygook. Prog was often labelled as pretentious and pompous, while the deconstructionist punk movement was lauded for bringing rock back to its roots (except, of course, without the seminal blues connection which seemed equally repugnant and overplayed to many trendy fops in the mid 70s).
 
So what exactly is "incoherent" in a prog album (or any album, for that matter)? Is the lyrical subject matter inconsistent in some way? I find that implausible in most cases. Sgt. Peppers is considered by some self-described "experts" as the first concept album, when in actuality only two songs and the intro to a third have anything to do with the legendary Sergeant. The rest of the album has utterly nothing to do with the album title, nor do the song lyrics mesh in any conceivable way as to be conceptual in the same way as an album like Days of Future Passed, also released in 1967.
 
What one might wish to ask is what the musician was trying to do (other than sell albums, of course) with his/her recording. Albums don't have to have a central theme to be coherent, and frankly most albums are not concepts (thank the mythical bearded deity above). Who is the performer trying to reach? If you think the piece in question is incoherent, perhaps you are not the audience they are trying to reach, particularly if other listeners enjoy the album.
 
 


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Good post.  Agree with mostly everything.  This was a point I wanted to bring out too.  What if the albums, those decorated masterpieces of the 70s, that a large majority here considers coherent are disliked and found to be pretentious by those not interested in prog?  I can certainly understand how an album may be found to be incoherent by somebody for himself. The problem is when such a complaint is mentioned in a review, it is intended for the audience of the album or that kind of music per se and many who read the review may not agree with that complaint.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 02 2014 at 20:07
Originally posted by The Dark Elf The Dark Elf wrote:

What one might wish to ask is what the musician was trying to do (other than sell albums, of course) with his/her recording. Albums don't have to have a central theme to be coherent, and frankly most albums are not concepts (thank the mythical bearded deity above). Who is the performer trying to reach? If you think the piece in question is incoherent, perhaps you are not the audience they are trying to reach, particularly if other listeners enjoy the album.

This can get dangerously circular though. Who gets to define what is an album's proper audience? Is it "as defined by the artist", or "as defined by music critics", or something else? If we always let the artist define their own audience, what if they say it is "the set of people who enjoy my album" and to heck with the rest?

A related conundrum: which album is a greater success -- a pop album enjoyed by 1 million of the 5 million who bought it, or an underground album enjoyed by 9,000 of the 10,000 people who bought it?
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